Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of the Gamer
dobbys-stinger chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
It's a good start to this story just as good other story
Raidonshotgun chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
I expect wonderful things from this story, and also good luck with the plot making cause you know thats hard.
lucifuge 101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
All-rounded, focused or ignored till last second stat increase
Don't understand why nobody focuses on VIT,WIS,LUCK since there harder and more time consuming to train then STR,DEX,INT.
Talon Blu chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
i like it. will be looking for to more.
shubhendu dutta chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
A very good start. Let's see how you go about the story.
yurei king chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Okay, read it and loved it. You've got a great start here and I can't wait to see what you bring into the plot next. Wonder if you're gonna make Harry a close-range or long-range fighter while maybe Hermione will be like a support type.

Can't wait to see how you work it.
hannahisabannana chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Love it, love it, love it! Can't wait for more! XD
Yami-Guy chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Shite you have a ten year old reading "A Song of Ice and Fire" aka Game of Thrones! Gosh he must be mature, not to mention well learned...what with all the death, large amounts of inventive cursing, frequent sex scenes with participants of questionable age, and many drug references.
ABeaupain chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
A good foundation! Though I found Dumbledore's exposition on why Harry lives with Dursleys (and to a greater extent the state of American magical society) a bit forced. Since this is taking place 6-8 months before Harry's letter arrives (Christmas-time), the scene may flow better as a conversation between Minerva and Albus. e.g. "Oh Albus, I always worry about Harry this time of year." "I do too Minerva. He's as safe as he can be with his muggle family. Certainly safer than if the ministry placed him in a 'proper' home." etc etc.

Oh, and good Jurassic Park reference. :)
highfist chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Great start! Please hold off on Harry telling people about his gamer ability! Knowledge is power and life is unpredictable! Harry could easily lie about what he can do or tell a partial truth like "gee, herminone i don't know why that monster dropped money and stuff these things just seems to happen around me" having that ability is a secret best kept very close to the chest and if you really want him to tell his "friends" about make them swear magical oaths that way he can cover his bases
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Dumbledore is flawed indeed. What exactly happened to the Dursleys?
Ranger Zareth chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
When Harry gets to Hogwarts since I don't know if you are going to keep it as Harry being in Gryffindor(depending on how you do the pre-Hogwarts chapters you might end up with a Harry that wouldn't be in Gryffindor), you could have Harry "pick" which house he is in due to his gamer abilities blocking the hat, or have the hat find out about his powers. Another thing I think would be cool to see is if the house he gets in comes with a Title for example Ravenclaw student could give a 10% additional EXP to classes in Hogwarts and 1 Wis and Int per level, or something else of that sort. Besides the above tips or requests or whatever you want to call them the first chapter was great and I can't wait for more in the future.
Twisted Pxl chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
I liked this crossover, but there were a few things that I saw that needed fixing. There were some places that had words missing, one such instance is the 'All-Bone' Perk of the Ordinary Skeleton. Here is what it says:

30% increased damage from hand to hand combat and blunt objects, Immune to 30% increase to movement speed in and out of combat, 30% increase towards Evasion and Dodging Skill.

What is it immune to? It just seems odd that this took place.

This is only real big thing I saw (or at least I can remember). Most other things are either grammatical errors or just accidentally missing a word.
Ky Karno chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
I have to say that this is a pretty awesome start. I've been reading you're other fix Daw of the Gamer for a bit as well and I think the systems you've worked out really fit! I also like the flair you add in the enemy descriptions. Looking forward to more of this!
coffeesabregirl1492 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
Love it so far I love your naruto dawn of the gamer keep up the good work
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