Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of the Gamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is the most creative way to get rid of Harry’s cannon reset button |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter, thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't suppose you are aware of Minerva's canon relationship history, are you? You can find it fairly easily just by Googleing her name. Wizardingworld dot com has a pretty thorough coverage of her life before the books started. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I don't read stories where the author contradicts himself, that ruins her immersion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() A friendly piece of advice, don't make your fic overcomplicated, KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID!... Overcomplicated, like the addition of too many OCs and a divine being! You will note that these additions usually end in the author burning out of ideas just to include these characters and make the advantage of Harry"s gamer system in check as to not make him too OP...what is wrong with being OP? The objective of the gamer system concept is to give Harry "the power he knows not" meaning he must be OP to really crush Voldemort and his goons in the final battle! Not by some random luck or technicality. I have read several Gamer fics that was abandoned because of its overcomplication. |
![]() ![]() ![]() New, chapter, great! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How can Harry be the price when he had no input in it? How can Harry lose his freedom in the deal when he didn't involve himself? Didn't he say deals can be forced. What is this. |
![]() ![]() yeah but harry didnt make the deal... so how can he be marked? Seems against the rules you laid out earlier, a sign of a poor lore |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read an I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im glad you're getting yourself some decent sleep now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see a chapter, it was unexpected but much appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really want to see what happens next. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best of luck with the job, appreciated a new chapter, though i was lost enough that i had to go back and reread. |