Great story

This is so much better than the TV episode.

Please write more suspenseful, exciting Castie stories.

This is good, suspenseful, thrilling, exciting. We love Castle. Wish you’d continue to write more Castle.

I think this is one of the best post 47 seconds I’ve read. Great writing

I loved this story but it was not long enough

i don't understand all you reviewers you say he lied to her bullshit he never did he kept her safe by keeping her away from her moms case she on the other hand lied repeatedly to him about saying she didn't remember anything about the shooting she is not only stupid but mentally inmature

This was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you

At least Castle had a little self respect and didn't go crawling after her.

Oh my god... I need to go to bed and they're planning to storm in. How can I sleep!?

These men need a public flagellation and then being skinned alive

I need to go to sleep, now. But how can I? I'm hocked up on adrenaline.
That bastard keeps slapping her. Grrrrr. He needs to be disemboweled and barbecued.

Yeah. Lots if nervous, panicky thoughts.
The shit just got real.
I'm so angry at those motherf*ckers on Beckett's behalf.

I don't know why he's being labeled a jackass. What is he doing? Going out on a date? So what? He's a single man. He stuck around while she was parading Josh around. She left for the summer without a word. To the uninformed, it certainly does appear like she's stringing him along.
Clearly, I'm "Team Castle"
Love the story, btw.

I'm nothing if not a HUGE Caskett lover but, I always felt that Beckett took Castle for granted for way too long.
I always felt he needed to distract himself while she figured her shit out.
He's Richard Castle, for heaven's sake.