| Reviews for DxD: Gamer |
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   VamPyr00 chapter 4 . 10/9/2023 I feel like the cringe is just getting worse as the story goes on...that whole meeting was just horrible. Also seems like the grammar is actually getting worse. Kind of feels like this story was written by a horny 12 year old... |
| VamPyr00 chapter 3 . 10/9/2023 So...the description of the Legion Zombie says it doesn't feel pain. It then proceeded to stand there, basically unmoving and 'in pain' for like half the fight as he bombarded it with newly created spells. It even tried to 'scream in pain', its 'eyes widened in pain', and it 'groaned in pain' according to what is written. "...girls don't like guys with money because they are materialistic...Girls like guys with money because they can indulge them in whatever they want...(proceeds to 'impress' her by buying clothes and jewelry)" THAT is literally the definition of materialistic. Overall, Author/MC seems completely clueless about women and basically everything else. While I don't mind a little wish fulfillment, this is just poorly written so far. I'm going to assume the Author isn't a native English speaker though, so I'll continue just to see if there is any improvement. I somewhat like the premise of the story, after all, even if it IS a bit childish for my tastes. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 2 . 10/9/2023 Oof...this is REALLY cringe dialogue. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 1 . 10/9/2023 Why would he want a movement skill that intentionally makes noise? Also, shouldn't he make a Detection ability or something as well? I personally would have liked something like Death Beam (DBZ) or Spirit Gun (YuYu Hakusho) for my long range attack. |
| Whatevergirl chapter 5 . 9/28/2023 Something's seriously wrong with you. |
| kasicair chapter 1 . 7/2/2023 There is so much smirking in this fic that you can drown in it. It's so stupid. |
| LEPS069 chapter 10 . 6/2/2023 WHERE IS THE CONTINUATION MAN?! What about DEN?! You write so well, and the debauchery in your fics is the best, why don't you continue? |
| SavageDonut12 chapter 10 . 5/2/2023 Damn this story is awesome! I hope you only on Hiatus for it and it's not dead. |
| PaleFeed chapter 1 . 4/27/2023 nobody talks like this, so far the story is okay but the dialogue sucks |
| moh999 chapter 6 . 4/23/2023 look who is talking about sociopaths, another atheist who loves to blame it on God and not themselves |
| Spanner96 chapter 2 . 4/9/2023 A better lie, and one that would actually be closer to the truth, would have been he learnt online. He could say he was nervous going into the fight but ignored that to help them, getting brownie points, and it would also explain away his awkward movements as someone with no combat experience. Saying he learnt at a gym means he’s likely had sparring matches, so his awkwardness would be suspect. |
| marquis.shax chapter 10 . 3/5/2023 a shame you've abandoned this story not only were the lemon scenes fairly good but the story was also actually semi decent as well. It's at least a good enough read to cure the boredom in between updates of any other stories I'm reading lol |
| Dead Ends chapter 10 . 2/27/2023 Can't believe the last update was 6 years ago |
| ProfesserDrip chapter 4 . 2/25/2023 why can't all fanfictions be like this masterpiece? |
| ProfesserDrip chapter 1 . 2/25/2023 keep these fanfic coming I will read every chapter!1 |