I love the story and content and romance! All great, but it kinda felt rushed to me. Just a bit, though. Maybe when Kiro is trying to help Sakura recognize her feelings try to tell the readers how she feels. Like have her think about it, or maybe even have her blurt it out. It felt bland to just basically go from 'I don't know how to feel' to 'I love him'. I hope this makes sense! _

Cute

Good idea to think of what it would be like if they did kiss in that episode. Very sweet. Good job _

Not bad, but the only episode I recall from this is when she caught Light and Dark at the same time. They never showed the kiss or anything.