|Reviews for Eclipse|
| sleath56 chapter 55 . 7/4/2013
I don't see the point in having the ending to this the same as canon. I
| The Dark Sister chapter 15 . 6/16/2013
mmm, this is very interesting! Really dark, just draws me in *gestures to name up there*. My only complaint is that everything's a bit hard to read when it's all in bold; is it possible to revert it back to normal text, or is it 's malfunction?
| Hichitsuki-hime chapter 55 . 8/12/2012
Well, this is a magnificent story and I really enjoyed reading it. Your Dooku turned out really well, I can certainly see the appeal ) though it really is too bad they couldn't have had the happy ending )
| Nightshadow913 chapter 19 . 6/17/2012
This is a brilliant story - I love the concept of Dooku/Padme! But where IS Padme? She's been missing the last few chapters. And do we get to see Obi-Wan turn to the dark side?
| Cmdr's Monkey chapter 55 . 4/26/2012
You know, I missed class during the Dooku vs Sidious chapters. I just could not put my phone down at lunch time! Honestly, I do believe that Sidious fight with Windu should have been written by you instead of Lucas. Your Sidious vs Dooku fight, I could easily see and it makes Sidious appear all the more fricking awesome!
And now 55 chapters later, its over and I'm saddened, tear-jerking saddened that Dooku is dead. *cry*
Also I was half expecting that Dooku would go all "Obi-wan, I am your father" on him at some point in the story. Lol. An idea I see circulating around in a lot of fan fics. Did I miss something?
| MiraiMangaka chapter 6 . 11/15/2010
I'm sorry. I had to stop because the effect this story is having on me is scaring my roommates. Take that as a compliment, please. I am now a Dooku fan, dammit! Is that sad? I wasn't even really a SW fan to begin with! I loved it as far as I got, and I'm sorry I have to stop because my already unstable mental is being greatly disturbed.
Aka: I sense a disturbance in the force! Lol! Sorry, very bad/dry sense of humor.
| Charles McCoy chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
You know, I find the authors note very intriquing. I have to say that I was already planning on reading this, but now I am DEFINITIVELY going to read this. You've got my interest and attention Mr. Jurious _
| tornadoblake2009 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
| Lady Avotil chapter 55 . 8/25/2009
Well, it took me some time to read the entire story, due to the fact that my mum constantly confiscated the laptop(although I don't blame her - she had to do some work on it and it was her laptop after all, which I commandeered in order to read your fantastic and awesome story)._
I'm impressed of your will to keep writing this lovely piece of literature until the end and I greatly admire your writing style. I wish I could have a writing style like that. I prefer writing conversations and so descriptions are not my forte._
I think that DookuxPadme is a lovely pairing and I've always like Dooku, despite the fact that he was a Sith Lord in both movies(although I still don't see why they had to exactly cut of his head in RotS and not just simply stab him through the chest - it was a bit cruel, if you ask me).
Anyway, I actually read your story twice(yes, I liked it that much) and I see now how Anakin's and Serenn's(BTW, nice choice of name_) positions got reverced. I mean, even in the final battle, it's Dooku who saved Obi-Wan from Vader, just like Anakin had once saved Obi-Wan from Dooku during the battle of Geonosis. very clever of you to do so. Besides, the Anakin in your story never deserved Padme, even from the beginning. I also liked the way that Padme got more and more attracted to Dooku and more and more afraid o Anakin, ending in her choosing Serenn over Anakin. So, good job on the story in short._
I was also wondering if you could write another DookuxPadme fanfic. Through your story I started to like this pairing. Actually, I hadn't even thought of it before._
I also found out that you had an account on DeviantArt and I saw your drawings there. Not only do you have writing skills, but also drawing ones. I also liked the Lion King version of Qui-Gon's death. It was very cute._
Well, I hope that you'll answer my review._
P.S.: This is the longest review I have ever written, never mind that it is in letter form._
| rockstar1093 chapter 55 . 6/18/2009
Even though I feel it's pointless in reviewing old stories, I just had to review this one!
I have a thing for odd pairings, but somehow still work, in my fandoms, and after rewatching the prequel Star Wars, this was the oddest pairing i could think of. But after reading all 55 chapters of your story, i immediately loved the pairing! If only there were more fics of them!
I absolutely loved your depiction of Dooku from manipulative villain to tragic hero. And although I did not like Padme much, your story just made me love her more.
Hopefully you will read this and my minutes in writing this were not in vain! Looking forward to anymore future writings from you!
PS: If you know of any other great Dooku/Padme fics or twisted pairings in general i'd love to hear them!
| SilverWolf47 chapter 55 . 3/5/2009
Bit of a blast from the past, I imagine this will be. I recently found myself thinking about this fic and having the urge to reread it. So I hunted it down (forgot I had it on my favorites list)and read it. And the afternote. And just on a whim, I read through the reviews. And to my complete utter horror, I realized I had never reviewed the final chapter. Good God! As soon as I realized, I of course had to correct the oversight. So here you go.
Wow. Just wow, this whole incredible story. I haven't watched the movies in some time, but you have reawakened the urge to see them again big time. I'd forgotten how much I thoroughly enjoyed your rendition of Count Dooku. I understand he had to die, but it still hurt like hell when he did.
And the ending. The image of Obi Wan standing in front of the funeral pyre with young Luke is just powerful. I can't put into words how much I enjoyed the journey you took us on. Sorry this review is so ridiculously late, I have no clue what I was doing. But the fact that I apparently never reviewed the end of this story really bothered me. So I thank you again for an incredible Star Wars story and definitely one of my favorites. ;o)
| Lumy12 chapter 55 . 9/15/2008
WOW. I'm pretty sure that's the longest fanfic I've ever read. Gizzi1213 was raving about it, and I was skeptical about the Dooku/Padme pairing but decided to give it a whirl. And just... wow!
I never thought I could enjoy that pairing. I never thought I could actually root for DOOKU to win Padme's affections over Anakin (my favorite character!)... but you forced me to! :)
I like how you meshed the PT into canon OT by the end of it, so that this is really how it all /could/ have happened prior to ANH.
Your characters are wonderfully developed and your writing just flows... gah, I feel like I should say SO much more since it was so long and took you so long to write. Just... great work. It must please you to still be attracting new readers 3 years after you posted the final chapter, eh? :)
It took me 2 months to read the whole thing. I'm going to miss it now! I second Gizzi1213's motion for you to post it on LJ.
Thank you for sharing this story. May the Force be with you as well!
| LameBicycle98 chapter 55 . 8/4/2008
That was significantly better than the movies - which I thought were pretty good, myself. I'm pleased that you've expanded a character who I thought deserved way more depth - you gave him justice. Count Dooku finally breathed.
If I was to criticize, I would say that you did make Padme into a bit of a cliche' woman victim throughout - but then again after she got pregnant in the movies, her role was pretty similar, except at least in yours she wasn't reduced to one-lines and "omg, no, I love you anakin! Stop choking me!"
... and I can understand why the Jedi weren't allowed to have sex - apparently everyone else knows about it. It's like constant streaming porn! Poor Yoda, just think of all the illicit porn he's had to watch in his days.
Great job! A very brilliant and mature undertaking. Your writing is subtle and clear, a well thought out tale that did not disappoint. And I loved Grevious - you made him ridiculously interesting as well. Thanks a bunch!
| Grand Master Yoda chapter 55 . 6/21/2008
"Obvious is it not, Dooku? Turn me, Dooku. I beg you. Show me the greatness of the darkside..." Yoda to Count Dooku, Dark Rendezvous
| David Fishwick chapter 55 . 6/16/2008
Nice idea and thanks for writing. I liked the pallrells between Dooku and Anakin. You are a great author.