Hold up, what the fuck?

Its a shame this story hasnt been updated in so long, it had a really interesting premise, and I was really looking forward to seeing how the fall was going to go down. Ill follow just in case you ever go back to updsting this fic.

This is proof… every jaune arc gamer fic is full of cliche and constant reuse of other plots within another fanfic. There is something wrong with you people I cannot fathom.

Just saying February 21st is long gone an i love this book

Was going to continue the story?

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hilarious!

Prologues like this are some of my favorite. They give me such poignant feelings, enough so I can shed the good ol' yearly tear.

cuando sale otro cap

I mean, we see for ourselves in the show that there isn’t racism against faunus. The closest are traumatized veterans, bullies and criminals who treat everyone equally badly, and rightfully wary security personnel. Oh, and a drunk whose, y’know, drunk.

On the other hand, there seems to only be one or two faunus that are bigoted racists.

On top of all that, canonically faunus have had equal rights. Apparently since the end of the Great War. Meaning the faunus have absolutely zero excuse or reason for their behavior.

Fics and fans treating them like victims are totally wrong, and blaming humans is the epitome of victim-blaming.

holy shit mans had undershirt from battle network

Been rereading this goddamn masterpiece, and The DLC, at multiple points, brought me to where I needed to do the fucking captain Kirk disappointed pose with the biggest smile on my face. If you are reading this, Neo Shadows, I beg of you, please come back to this story! It is such a fascinating world you have set up, and the things like Cardin and his team being actual characters, and Ren having the same outlook as SANS "ALREADY BEFRIENDED YOUR MOM" UNDERTALE make it one of the best stories I've read on this site.

Great story. love it and hope you update it soon.

One thing I can say for sure is that this story was positively surprising. The OC's aren't bad, the jokes are funny and I laughed quite a few times.

In my heavily biased opinion it would be cool for Weiss to have some kind of flashes from the first chapter, the world of this story is full of glitches after all. It would be quite interesting, such interaction, her having 'dreams' about Jaune defending her and getting nearly bisected by a chainsaw. She knows about the scar and it would no doubt confuse her.

If I understood the DLC chapters correctly, the Red Riding Hood implied that she felt as she knew him much better than the short time they didn't together would allow to. That part of the story was quite cool BTW. I'm a sucker for well written isekais and that part wasn't bad.

I'll certainly wait for more!

The sheer amount of cheese in the first chapter caused my cholesterol to skyrocket... cheese is good...