Reviews for Crossing Lines |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's really satisfying to see the letter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow这个结局好棒,想看后面的故事啊啊啊这个展开一定很有趣 |
![]() ![]() ![]() 漏好绝望的展开,但我还是爱他 |
![]() ![]() ![]() 在看上一章时我还在担心双子对西里斯的误解会导致偏见,但在这章的结尾,我又感觉心安,掠夺者知道了一些未来又没全知道,西里斯或许会因此更加谨慎而不导致灾难,彼得会因为他战争英雄的预言而更坚定立场吗? After reading the first chapter, I was still worried that twins'misunderstand would lead to prejudice about Siris, but at the end of this chapter, I felt at ease. The marauders knew some future but didn't know everything, so Siris might be more cautious and not lead to disaster. Will Peter stand firm because of his war hero's prediction? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this the weasly twins are so underated |
![]() ![]() ![]() 真好,哈利终于见到了尖头叉子,也不用成为火焰杯的勇士了 |
![]() ![]() 넘 재밌게 봤어요 ㅎㅎ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw man. Harry and Neville getting their letters made me lose it. Completely bawling over here. Gosh, that was such a thoughtful thing for the twins to do for them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() See, what i dont understand is that if they were creating an ageing potion to put their names in the triwizard tournament, they wouldve already known that Sirius Black is innocent. So why are they so hostile against him when they shouldn’t be? They should be more hostile towards Peter Pettigrew! |
![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this. I think the way Rosier had a chat with George is a great detail that shows how different houses characteristic might come into play, with loyalty to slytherin being so important. Also how the revelations might play into them marauders figure choices in life... Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this. It's brilliant, and healed my broken heart after reading The Snape Chronicles... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great writing! The characters feel like real people, the lore details are well thought out, the dialogue feels natural. I particularly liked the tidiness of the plot and even the bitersweet open ending (although I certainly wouldn't complain about you waging in on those questions in the author note :) Thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() i'm trying to figure out if the twins are in sixth year this means it's the fourth book also meaning that harry ron and hermione should have shared about sirius not being a bad guy and this means they should also already know that scanners is peter perigees so it just doesn't make sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit, Fred was the one that got the Potters killed. |