Reviews for Dark Coil
EvelynWatsonx chapter 19 . 7/11/2008
oh Wonderful chapter! yay! they did it finally *laughs&
EvelynWatsonx chapter 17 . 7/11/2008
I am up to Ch 17 now and everything is great

but I want to comment on the format of your fanfiction.

Please consider to use a black line like this _

to divide story scenes and your writer's notes.

It can get extremely confusing like speaking everything in one breath lol.

00 chapter 43 . 6/4/2008
One of the good stories. Long abandoned. Sad.
laura chapter 43 . 9/13/2007
what on EARTH are you THINKING? How can you abandon this story, and your readers? You haven't updated in THREE YEARS? this has probably been one of the most well-constructed stories I've ever read, and now u say 'thats that'? Please, get it straightened out and start writing!
veelasiren chapter 43 . 8/26/2007
I just wanted to let you know that this is one of the best and most compelling Severus stories out there. I read on your Yahoo group that you were unsure of whether or not you wanted to finish it as it is now AU (I tend to lurk). Please finish it. I like this Severus better than the canon one.
00 chapter 43 . 5/26/2007
Please; if you have notes to the end for this story, post them.
Barb8 chapter 30 . 8/27/2006
When are you Ever going to post more?
salasna chapter 43 . 5/5/2006
this story is one of the best snape/oc. are you going to continue writing ? in ffn or ? please write more, we are waiting you to update for almost 2 years
Barb8 chapter 42 . 2/17/2006
Are you going to continue with this or leave us hanging?
Barb8 chapter 43 . 2/14/2006
I just discoved this great story and read it from beginning to this point. When are you going to update?
Guest chapter 43 . 1/29/2006
Long time, no post. Is this glorious story dead? Sad.
Guest chapter 20 . 11/13/2005
Will the good stories die? Another victim of ... time. Sad.
cindy chapter 43 . 10/15/2005
he's beautiful? looks just like his daddy? of course he's beautiful. i'm so glad olivia is okay and that draco is still with his hide intact. get on with it witch!
bluebonnet babe chapter 43 . 7/31/2005
please write more.

You haven't updated in a year!

Write, gosh darn-it, write!

Bluebonnet Babe chapter 42 . 7/31/2005
I love this chapter, espically the last few paragraphs!

My wonderful, aunt...keep up the good work

Love ya

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