Reviews for A Jedi in Dumbledore's Court - Episode I |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I happened to come across this by someone else’s favorites, and was already planning on looking up your stories thanks to a comment by another author making a shoutout about the howler mandrake scream… Im certainly going to check out the rest of your stories now… |
![]() ![]() ![]() If he wants to remain a Jedi then I recommend the Old Oath. Emotion, yet peace. Ignorance, yet knowledge. Passion, yet serenity. Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force. |
![]() ![]() I see your taking after JKR and Lucas lol. Not having anyone question why Albus hasn't bothered to check if the prophecy is real when he just stated that real one's are recorded. |
![]() ![]() Why didn't Harry just burn through the lock like a good logical jedi? Is he being contaminated by wizards? |
![]() ![]() I find the story quite interesting so far. A few things I don't understand though is why Harry is friends with Ron and the lack of interactions between Harry and Hermione. You seem to be sticking as much to canon as possible yet changing some just to stick to plot. For instance Ron never actually felt bad about how he treated Hermione and had to be convinced to go find her. Where you have him being reasonable. Not that it's a bad thing just doesn't make sense to me that's all. |
![]() ![]() With all of the background information you provided I find it interesting that you skipped over his scar by 99%. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying your story, which I recently found but I wanted to comment on your statement on Obi-Wan at the beginning of the chapter. I think in canon as it stands now, Obi-Wan was pulling his "truth from another point of view" stunts. First, Obi-Wan did never own any astromechs. He either requisitioned one when needed from the order stores (like poor R4 in Ep 3), or he borrowed Artoo from Anakin. Who was technically borrowing Artoo from Padme and the Naboo royal household. Second, note that the statement as phrased never indicated whether Obi-Wan RECOGNIZED the droid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope 0/10, didn't stop for frozen space burritos on the way to the hidden base. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Being out of sight in a moment isn’t very impressive, since 1 moment is 1.5 minutes. I think you mean second or instant, not moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shit story |
![]() ![]() Did you guys also give flamel a Scottish accent, or was it just me? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry be breaking just about wvery gossamn rule in the codex- xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so Nerdy on Star Wars and Harry Potter lore. I absalutly love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The grading system depends on what part of the U.K, my niece went to school in scotland and when moving to england went up a year since their grades work differently. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stumbled on this by accident, but I'm so glad I did; well done story! |