Reviews for A Jedi in Dumbledore's Court - Episode I |
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hdres chapter 17 . 9/1 A well written and imaginative story. I enjoyed the way you explained Ron’s behaviour and how Hermione responded. I also liked how your Harry was more thoughtful and measured in his response to various challenges. Thank you for sharing your story |
hdres chapter 13 . 9/1 It was interesting to see things from Nicholas’s perspective and how a new LS was designed. I am enjoying your story and the impact Jedi are having on the magical world. Thank you for sharing your story |
ColoradoBee3500 chapter 18 . 6/27 What about Hedwig? Is she going to chew Harry out for for leaving her behind? |
terrahsims chapter 18 . 2/9 "Flotsam, Jetsam, I've got her voice, your boss is on a...Oh, wrong story," Thank you for sharing this story with us, and I can't wait to read the next couple. |
terrahsims chapter 11 . 2/8 Ummm...dysgraphia. Yeah, thanks, I'll be looking that up. It explains so much! |
Grosvenor chapter 18 . 1/17 I loved this story! What a fantastic blend of Harry Potter and Star Wars.I do hope Harry decides to stay on Earth after graduation in seven years.I just can't see him involved in the Clone Wars... he has his own arc to be a part of! |
noylj chapter 17 . 1/12 MoRon gets the light saber? Really? Lucky he wasn't. Looking down the "muzzle" when he activated it. So, you remove an arm and then freeze up? |
noylj chapter 16 . 1/12 A knight? Be the king. What a MoRon |
noylj chapter 10 . 1/11 You do remember that the key to Bumble's plans is for Moldie to kill Harry? |
noylj chapter 8 . 1/11 Calming potion in the lemon? What potion master batter could miss a potion in food or drink? |
noylj chapter 3 . 1/10 You really think Al believed Sirius was guilty of a crime committed AFTER he left Harry with the worst sort of muggles? Al had Harry for almost 24 hrs and did nothing for him then had Hagrid kidnap and deliver him, instead of doing it himself. Also, why did Minnie, if she didn't know if the stories were true, spend almost 24 hours at Privet Dr.? Maybe you could explain that whole mash up of a plot hole. All I know is that Al has his pawns commit most of his crimes so he claim ignorance |
Hedwig chapter 6 . 12/16/2023 Why would this Harry Potter have named his owl Hedwig? He doesn’t know about Earth’s history. This HP would have likely named his owl something significant to the Jedi. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/16/2023 Overly detailed for no reason. |
Guest chapter 18 . 10/3/2023 c est faut les vision du futurdes jedi c est se qui intérèse le plus le senat |
Guest chapter 15 . 10/3/2023 les jedi pourais la retrouver et pour voldemort c est preies |