Reviews for Harry Potter: Air Elemental |
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Guest chapter 9 . 8/13 Just wanted to say I've been binging and loving your stories. Each one has its own unique twist and I've enjoyed them all so far. I really love your idea in this one w/H taking out the DE w/an overpowered obliviate. I feel badly for the poor house elves who have to take care of the new infants. It's well written and I'm really enjoying it. Thanks. |
exitus.ravenblade chapter 16 . 5/14 Very poor taste for Harry to make a joke about Susan having "smoldering desire" for Draco Malfoy's corpse. |
exitus.ravenblade chapter 15 . 5/12 Amelia was killed in a locked room in a muggle area. The Prime Minister says it is an unsolved mystery because he hadn't even considered she was magical. |
TennysonPoet chapter 19 . 4/24 Enjoyable. Not a great fan of the pairing usually but i liked it here. Thanks for the enjoyable read |
Mikeblade chapter 2 . 3/8 last chapter the one said he was a officer when on the phone no idea if that works as declaring him self as police so sorry if i sounded rude |
Mikeblade chapter 1 . 3/8 the police messed up they forgot to declare they where police vernon can use that to get out any charges since they kicked the door open and said nobody move at no time did they say they where the police witch they are required to by law |
odonnellzoo99 chapter 19 . 2/18 A distinctive Endgame since there is a battle/fight but without having to bury any Defenders. Such an excellent story. |
hdres chapter 19 . 1/10 A fabulous story with a wonderfully pragmatic Harry. I really liked how he decided not to follow Dumbledores plans and to go his own way. Thank you for sharing your story |
ecoBlade chapter 19 . 12/3/2023 Very nice story and i am amazded it has evaded me this long |
Love Faith Embers chapter 19 . 11/24/2023 This was a great story! |
ScrewballBRaine chapter 12 . 8/8/2023 Surely Snape wouldn't have done anything to him? Given that he's dead? |
Eroldin chapter 6 . 7/26/2023 Susan to HarryEven if girls are wrong, you'll rarely be told, so be happy I'm even admitting this much." HarryYou know it's really unfair that you won't admit your problems but I'm supposed to share everything." SusanThat's life, but I'll make it up to you later. People, if this ever happens in your life, especially if your fidelity has been questioned (Susan thought Harry saw another girl), break up immediately. If your boy/girlfriend expects you to be 100% open but is not willing to do the same to you and would not (often) admit he/she was wrong, he/she is NOT worth it. Your partner partner is either toxic, or at least has toxic tendencies. |
LordHadesinTartarus chapter 11 . 7/13/2023 I'm always very confused by this weird trope in fanfiction regarding blood feuds and the like; blood feuds are not, and have never been, formal or legal declarations in any culture. I don't know why they would somehow become such in a magical setting, let alone one which mimics late 18th century European culture. Duels have been legal in certain settings throughout the world, and they were reasonably common in the 17th through the early 20th centuries in Europe. By that token, I can understand duels being legal in the wizarding world; however, one generally couldn't challenge or engage in duels until they were considered a legal adult. It would be considered the height of dishonor and cowardice for an adult to fight a duel against a child (even if that child was 14-15, which was just a year shy of adulthood in most cultures until fairly recently). Sorry about the rant, but the Snape scene just really bothered me. |
LordHadesinTartarus chapter 7 . 7/12/2023 I've always found it odd that Rowling had a kid with poor vision in a position on a team, where his sole job is to attempt to find a tiny object flying about at incredible speed. If Harry needs glasses to see in general and we never hear about him taking them off to read either (I'm nearsighted, I don't need my glasses to read and in fact I find it somewhat bothersome to read with my glasses on), then Harry's vision must be particularly poor. So him being a seeker to begin with makes no sense to me (glasses don't give one superior vision, they just equalize it to that of someone with perfectly normal vision - ie. 20-20), but making him eagle eyed and spotting the snitch when he's not even playing makes even less sense. I can wear my glasses and I'll be able to drive, shoot, etc.; they don't allow me to keep track of a hockey puck from the stands and snitches are in the air and even faster than a puck (pucks are often moving in excess of 90 mph). |
Epeefencer chapter 9 . 7/10/2023 Sorry, I can't believe that Harry would be that oblivious as to what Mr Bones meant when he asked what Harry's intentions were. |