Reviews for Harry Potter: Air Elemental
AvidReader2425 chapter 13 . 9/10/2020
Another enjoyable chapter, thank you
AvidReader2425 chapter 12 . 9/10/2020
Another great chapter, thank you
AvidReader2425 chapter 11 . 9/10/2020
Another great and enjoyable chapter, thanks
AvidReader2425 chapter 10 . 9/10/2020
Another really great chapter, and personally, I really don’t like Dumbledore, I think he’s far too manipulative and caused a lot of deaths because of his pacifism.
AvidReader2425 chapter 9 . 9/10/2020
Another excellent chapter, thank you
AvidReader2425 chapter 8 . 9/10/2020
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter yet again
AvidReader2425 chapter 7 . 9/10/2020
Another great chapter, thanks
AvidReader2425 chapter 6 . 9/10/2020
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter.
AvidReader2425 chapter 5 . 9/10/2020
Another enjoyable chapter again, thank you
AvidReader2425 chapter 4 . 9/10/2020
Thanks for another enjoyable chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 3 . 9/10/2020
Another enjoyable chapter, thank you very much
AvidReader2425 chapter 2 . 9/10/2020
Well that was a heartbreaking separation, really hope he can help them later on in the story, thanks for the chapter
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 9/10/2020
Excellent opening chapter, thank you very much.
Neoacoya1 chapter 3 . 8/20/2020
What an offensive turn of phrase: "train a boy...to be a boyfriend like you've always wanted"
Can you imagine the shitstorm that would arise from a boy saying he wanted to train a girl to be the perfect girlfriend?

I really hate it when authors write relationships in a way where the male is supposed to completely change themselves, but the female can stay as she is because 'women are wonderful.'
Neoacoya1 chapter 1 . 8/20/2020
I'd have refused to attend the church service. I don't have a problem with religious people, but I will NOT have it forced on me.
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