Oh, that's so sad!

Amazing and I love it

I was reading through my old reviews I made across the last day lol, and I realised I messed up my 'Trace' review.

***Tom could probably kill his grandparents the summer after sixth year because he turned 17 two months into his sixth year! No more Trace.

YESSSSSSS THIS WAS FREAKING BRILLIANT! I BLOODY LOVE DUMBLEDORE! BUT YOU NEVER HAD HIM ANSWER - WHY DID HE KILL GRINDY INSTEAD OF LOCKING HIM UP? AND I LOVED THAT CONVERSATION WITH GILDERYS! AND ARCTURUS - I LIKE HIM, but I'll like him more of Orion gets out of this engage my, otherwise will bloody LOATHE him. ALSO HOW IS RIGEL? He's been gone for like 7 months? And dude, you with those Cassius doom moments, YOU CANNOT TAKE AWAY/DESTROY ORION PLSSSSSS. He's like the best part of this fic. I love him more than Tom and I do love Tom hahaha.

GURL wtf you're 17?! YOU ARE SO TALENTED! You better keep writing and publish something down the line!

Forgot to mention I LOVED HOW YOU MADE THEM GET THE BOATS BACK after the final feast! So moving!

Is Harry REALLY SOMEHOW not thinking about deleting Sirius' existence by helping Orion? LOL! I actually REALLY want Orion to get a chance to fall properly in mutual love you know. Can you imagine how SWEET seeing a relationship like that with him would be?! Maybe Harry can somehow pull HIS Sirius from the Veil so that it won't matter if Orion and Walburga separate and Orion can find his own true love?! Hahaha. Oh and then Harry won't care about going "home" if Sirius is with him lel and Sirius can get to know his dad #goals

So Grindelwald died instead of going to Nurmengard! Is this so Tom believes he has to kill Dumbledore rather than just being able to disarm the Elder wand from him?! Which I HOPE HE DOES NOT DO. Hahaha. I hope he finds a better path to immortality! I didn't like Cassius being so morbid - talking about casualties! I hope it's not Orion. You created such a perfect human when you wrote him. I honestly think I might reread this story JUST FOR ORION. He's captivating. I kiiiiiind of wanted Atticus and Harry to have some moment of reconciliation - an understanding. Kind of like how Draco and Harry ended up having a grudging respect for each other/almost friendship by the end of DH. You've effectively made me NOT WANT HARRY HOME! Because Tom and Orion won't survive without him! He can just see his friends in fifty years, yeah? Haha

Orion is life buuuut it's probably a little slap to Hermione and Ron who'd die for Harry to say
"You're the best friend I've ever had." They're all equal in their own ways hehe. I mean OBVIOUSLY Orion is quite probably the best friend he's ever had, but it's a dangerous hing to say these things with your best pals good as dead lol.

AHH FLUFFY TOM CHAPTER THERE!

BEAUTIFUL!

Soooooo glad Tom still cares about Harry.

Is the Healer called Hannah or Millie? (Hagrid called her Milloe didn't he?)

THIS MERRYTHOUGHT INSPO IS SOOOO GOOOOOOD I LOVE THE TALKS - you're kind of inspiring me lol.

DUMBLEDORES MAMA LOVE IT OMG! Kinda wanna find the old chapter she was in earlier but I forget what that was haha

OMG THE ORION KISS AND HARRY'S SWEET SWEET WORDS TO HIM OMGGGGGGG ORION NEEEEEEDS TO MARRY SOMEONE WHO LOVES HIM HE DESERVES EVERYTHING PLS CAN HE DO THAT AFTER FATHERING SIRIUS OR

And poor Septimis omg. Can't Tom just have a Philosopher's Stone? Then he can share with Harry

Three Rachels in here now! Is there a Rachel in real life you're honouring? :) I love Bea! I think she any favourite of the Rachels!

THIS CHAPTER ACTUALLY HAD ME LAUGHING OUT LOUD SO MUCH! "Not this dick again" hahahahaha. And OMG ORION WITH THE WAND SHAKING, THE WAY YOU WROTE THAT SCENE HAHAHAHAHAHAHA AND I JUST LOVE THAT WE ALL KNOW ORION IS ALWAYS NUMBER 1 AND TOM IS OK WITH THAT. Seriously, what a freaking Angel Orion is, I want him in MY LIFE! I prefer him to Ron really - is that bad? He's just so pure and selfless.

I forgot Ro mention earlier but this was so funny:
Hear that, Hermione?' he'd say, 'Voldemort called you 'sensible'.'

LOVE IT

ALSO YESSSSS LOOOOVE MERRYTHOUGHT! Perfect blend of Moody and McGonagall! BRILLIANT! I screenshot her talk with Harry for the brilliant inspiration on living after loss AND the lols about traumatising students lel

I like that you gave Grahams a little bit of backbone!

So, I think the Trace was in effect BUT Tom turned sixteen at the end of fifth year so THAT'S why he could kill his family!

Man I love Orion. I just want everyone to be happy. I want Sirius and Regulus to have a happy childhoods haha. OMG CAN YOU IMAGINE... HARRY AND SIRIUS BEING EACH OTHER'S GODFATHERS? Hahahaha! But I also want Harry to be able to reunite with his real Sirius and I dunno it's all so confusing hahahahaha