This was really nice, I enjoyed reading it!

This is a nice little story. I really like Juuzou's and Rena's relationship.

Honestly though, it seems to me that what Rena feels for Juuzou IS just a high school crush. She likes the idea of him rather than him as a person. Because Rena has no clue who he even really is.

Still, its a cute story. Though I see their relationship evolving into a more brotherly and sisterly type...

My favorite Juuzou romance fanfiction! Hahahaa you know you has skill in writing, you're talented. I think you're really capture Juuzou character. And i like your OC, Rena. She's a bit childlish, amd immature, she's funny! She and Juuzou will defineltely be a cute couple! Looking forward for your updates!

Aaahhh really really really liked this! You know, i love your juuzou stories, like Time For Healing. And i love this one too, i liked rena character you know... I hope you dont abandoned this story, im looking forward to your update!

'Nobody would think they had bad intentions if cake was involved.'
Yeah.. totally.. XD

Nice chapter...
Humour was nicely done..
The times when he offered her sweets, i imagined him as L and not Juuzou.. haha.. they look kinda similar as well..

Never in all my lurking life have I seen Suzuya written so in-character. Teach me your ways (senpai :o)

I adore this story so much - I've read it four (five?) times over. It's so. so. sosososososo. I don't know. Everything about it is just super great AND I LOVE IT. I love Rena - she's so unique and full or character and a great breathe from those peace-loving, understanding other OCs. Even if she's kind of very much of a prick. I love cacti. (laughs)

I hope you update this soon! I'm really looking forward to it. Don't worry even if you don't - updating frequently is hard. Thank you for writing this!

Wow this is a great story so far.
You've written juuzou really well and I also like your oc very much.
I hope you'll update soon I'm already excited for the next chapter. :)

ngl I had been a bit puzzled when I couldn't remember Rena's back story and didn't find a page for her on the Tokyo Ghoul wikia. Then I figured out she's an OC. She has a personality, and believable motive, and I can't for the life of me remember if I've ever read a fic with such a well done OC before. Bravo!

...Juuzou , why do you know the hourly rate for a whore in that area? I think that was what stood out to me and had me laughing for a while. But I do like your troubled teen Oc, she's so feisty but you can still see her immaturity. It's a nice blend, but something tells me Juuzou will have to swoop in and either save or gloat within her bad descions.