|Reviews for Elapse|
| Lily MJ Fae chapter 1 . 5/7
I have never read a time travel fic before (well except the awful one I wrote myself). This is certainly an interesting start and makes me interested in how Hermione ends up back in time. I am intrigued and will likely continue reading this :) I simply adore the pairing.
I feel like you have Severus characterized very well as well as James (from what we see in the distance). Winona is very lively and I think that's a fun fit, because I can see how she gets under is skin.
I also agree with Hermione being sorted into Ravenclaw. It is interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more of this.
| Dybicius chapter 4 . 2/26
I've always wanted to write something like this, where a small change in the past creates ripples in the fabric of space-time that ultimately alters the trajectory of history entirely; unfortunately, me and consistent chronological updates do not go together. This is looking wonderful so far, and I am eager to see where this goes...
| snape.granger.fanfic chapter 4 . 1/22
Oooooooh I'm loving this so far. Pleaseeeeee continue.
| Lucyole chapter 4 . 12/17/2016
really great Story very interesting please write more that would be nice.
*cookies for you*
| LadyRaider92 chapter 4 . 11/22/2016
The story is getting really interesting. Hope to see another chapter soon.
| Clem Marchal chapter 4 . 10/17/2016
I don't like how rude Severus is but I like this fic anyway, please continue to write it !
| Miss Black chapter 4 . 9/23/2016
Writer again please I love this fanfic.
| Gal chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
Please continue this story!
| sorrowsown chapter 4 . 7/14/2016
dun dun dun. loved the chapter. great tension between Dumbledore and Hermione. look forward to future developments and Snape/Hermione interactions
| ousia chapter 4 . 7/12/2016
Hey, nice story! Never read a timeturner fic starting like this! Sounds promising...
| Sassyluv chapter 4 . 7/9/2016
That last line though... Brilliant!
| Pppp72 chapter 4 . 7/5/2016
update soon and maybe a longer chapter please
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2016
I really liked this chapter. I hope Hermione does take everything into her own hands and forms a new Order with Severus, Lily, James, ect.
I got into Harry Potter late as well. I was a kid when the books came out but for some reason I always found it hard to take children seriously as main characters in stories, so I never read the books or movies. When I got to college, I had this one psychology professor that would use Harry Potter characters to explain or illustrate examples of psychological concepts. On tests, he would even ask us to use characters and concepts from the Harry Potter universe to explain our answers. On the first exam, I told my professor that I was not familiar with Harry Potter, so he thought for a minute and told me to base my answers off of Lord of the Rings, which thankfully I was familiar with. I ended up watching all of the movies that weekend just so I could get through that class. I fell in love with the Harry Potter universe after watching the movies and went back and read the books. That still wasn't enough, so now I'm into fanfiction. All because of that damn psychology professor! : )
| wisperinglilies chapter 4 . 7/6/2016
loved this chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. what is Hermione found to do? will she change things? how will Snape tapings when he figures out where she's from? ah! so many questions! also, I got into Harry Potter a bit late as well. the fourth book was coming out. my best friend introduced me to them. I done think I even read the first book until i had finished the rest of the series.
| Suzululu4moe chapter 4 . 7/6/2016
Lol snape overhearing it. Realizing that fumbles let even those of the light die. Too bad there isn't a pensive . It would be interesting to send Sirius n James the memory he'd probably murder fumbles .