Me while reading the third chapter and Tobirama feelings:

I FUCKING KNEW I-! (Crash all over the place)

Okay, first of all: I love you and your fics, I consider Second Wind to be truly a masterpiece in all the fanfics I ever read in life. Second: will we be getting one with Naruto and Tobirama? (Even if it not canon and is played unrealistic, my heart needs something to ease this pain I feel for him, didn't got the glory, some of his techniques stolen, his nose a mess, he didn't even got the girl. Man, my heart needs to be fooled)

Your writing of FemNaruto is wonderful, she haves character, flaws, and we actually can see her grown though the story. She's not perfect, and that's wonderful and great. She and the other characters haves character development, and you write events in a realistic way (well, realistic in a world of ninjas, but there is where you really amazed me: How you handle this world, techniques and it's events, being thrown in the past and don't be able to see your family and friends anymore, I did see fics where is portrayed this as "cool! now i can fix everything" but you really showed that is more deep, and sad than that)

Sometimes we don't get what we want, sometimes the world is cruel, sometimes things don't get as expected and we get hurt, over and over, how each character handle this (and why they do) is perfectly portrayed here.

To be honest, I really didn't noticed what you were talking about Dark Zetsu hate in the fic, for me, Naruto's thoughts towards him were perfectly normal, and again, handle nicely.

You made me cry, for real, with the scene of Naruto meeting her dear people from the past (future?) She breaking down while seeing them, the hurt in early scenes while carrying the world's future weight in her shoulders, the decisions she made, Madara memories while dying. And finally, the info you always presented before the chapters (that were a delightful touch, seeing as these curious phenomenon hinted something about the chapter in question) but the one of the final chapter being placed at the end, that about what Second Wind means, really hit me hard, it was like a flash of all the events of your fic passing though my mind in an instant, of Naruto struggles, moments of pain and having to keep going no matter what, feeling like she was about to fall...

...But catching breath again, and keep running at full performance.

That line is always going to be in my memory.

Thank you so much for Second Wind, it really touched many parts of me while reading it, gave me so many emotions, and left me smiling while tears kept falling from my eyes, because i felt truly happy with that end. I'm currently reading After the rain, you really captured me. And again, thank you so, so much.

I really enjoyed this story, which was a welcome addition to Second Wind. I particularly liked the end of the Love Story, it was beautifully written, and I felt a great deal of sympathy for Tobirama. Thank you!

Ever think of a one shot where tobirama finds out naruto is a time traveler. Or what if scenario where she gets with tobirama? Or even how tobiramas feelings for her develop? You got tobirama izuna and itama who all liked naruto. (cue fangirl mode for five seconds. And moment over) I'd love reading about what new naruto faces and his life growing up too. I love second wind and these couple one shots. I found myself crying back when naruto had to say goodbye. I wanted to hit sasuke for being an ass. Izuna and mada moments made me laugh he's a crack up. Please though. Consider a one shot where tobirama finds out she's a time traveler. I picture his jaw dropping.

Seeing how you wrote Tobirama.. is that a hint of a future femNaruto and Tobirama? :o If so... hehe (:

Now this got me quite interseted in reading Naruto/tobirama time travelling story. Never less I love reading these little one shots and main story. Wonderfully written can't wait to see what you write next.

love it bro

Pleaseeee make a one-shot where naruto is pregnant and has morning sickness and cravings! I'd love to see madara going through that hahaha
Love your stories so much !
Isabella xx

I have always loved Second Wind and now after this I'm crying all over again. I honestly think you made the best Tobirama. Please keep up the epic writing

I really loved the one shots. I'd be nice to see a few of how all their kids get along & their roles in the new generation ( Narutos original time line ).

Hey
I adored the last story. Very beautiful and suited Tobirama's personality well.
Thanks for the one-shots!

It's okay I'm fine with this one-shot and how things went with Tobirama, just because you love someone doesn't mean they are required to love you back.

Does this mean there's a possibility that the next story you write will be Tobirama centered ? Possibly a femSasuke pairing ? They meet when he's supposed to die by the Kinkaku force and she ends up saving him ? ? So much angst and drama potential I feel tempted in writing it myself.

Thanks again for the one-shot. It was greatly appreciated !

Wow...that was one heck of a chapter. And I loved every minute of it, ugh the madara naruko moments were so cute and I loved how you had a hashirama pov during mito's death and his relationship with Izumi. Great job love your work! ️️

omg...I can't believe that Tobirama had feelings for Naruto all this time! Okay, I can believe but man...what an interesting turn. No wonder he never took a wife.

This. This is what I needed to read.
When you explain it this way, I kinda feel bad for Tobirama

Wow...such a long chappy... Hope you write some one shot detailing about the love and domestic life on naruto and madara... I kinda get curious about their weddin and hiw madara acted during child birth etc...