I'm so happy you updated again! This chapter was well written, as always, and you developed the relationship between Izumi and Hashirama beautifully! I hope that they have a girl! I imagine quite the cute picture of her tagging along behind Naozumi excitedly on whatever childhood adventures they might have. Plus if things were too develop along a romantic lines for those two, Tsunade (or her potential counterpart in this story) would be calling Naruto "Baa-chan" instead of the other way around, lol.

That was beautiful.

I wonder though why Tobirama didn't even try a relationship with anyone else. Even Hashirama did so after a heartbreak...

I loved this one shot soo much...
The company text of writing, the length,
The various story lines...
They all gelled well..
Quill thanks for this fan fiction.
I know u did bad to Tobirama but it's your story and a has you POV.
I think you should write a sequel about Tobirama finding love and how the effect of naruto's actions in second wind affected all the other villages.
I think people would really love to read something lile that.
You could even write on a future generation, how kaguya was resurrected and how the information left behind by their forbearers (I.e Naruto and Madara) help them vanquish the task.
It could be set In like a thousand years after the events of second wind where chakra and technology have evolved soo much and Naruto would be like the sage with transmigrant chakra.
Well am just rambling now...this is just an idea I had.
I just wanna say thank you though for second wind.
A sequel would really be nice though.

i know this was mostly based on naruto life and tobirama life but izumi and hirashima love story was lost halfway through the story. i mean they get together but nothing else. and what about naru son?

The characters relationships really mystify me. Especially about Tobirama real feelings being suppressed of what he really feels about Naruto through the whole story and only his older brother realize it.

Well, I really really like thi story. even though I almost cry when reading about Mito's death. Again.
But you really know how to make a story that can makes the reader absored in the plot and feel complicated feeling. And the ending is just the way I like. Who says a love story had to be cheesy? I love ypur writing style really.
I'll wait for your next oneshot, Author-san!

Yesss i loved your story so much. It's great to see side stories with it

really enjoyed this story. liked the original Second wind story. keep up the good work and the updates

So you've decided to take this oneshots out? Well, I'm glad cause it'll make it easier for me to read your story.
Can't wait ro read your neq oneshots.

Oh my god, I was laughing so much while reading this. This is brilliant.

why don't you try making a story where Naruto (or female Naruto) is banished after the Sasuke Retrieval mission and joins a different village. If so how about Naruto joins Suna and has both Magnet and Scorch natures (have all Naruto's natures be really strong, maybe throw Ice nature also), have Naruto receive whatever inheritance was left from his/her parents.

next... madara have to deal with naru pregnancy mood and diaper duty. glory for fatherhood...
naru. do what other mother do. if the baby start crying at night, kick madara off the bed.

This is exactly the kind of thing no one would think of, up until you'd realize that it doesn't exist. And Gas. And electricity. And illumination. Man it's like they lived in huts before.