Reviews for Family Day
siobhan.22 chapter 5 . 12/24/2019
Good story
Guest chapter 5 . 11/3/2019
Love love love!
millerr123 chapter 5 . 10/26/2019
Please please please make a sequel to this story
andjelija.nenic chapter 2 . 8/16/2019
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
zswqjnmklpcx chapter 3 . 6/29/2019
Ana just couldn’t stop thinking about The Boys She heard the Story a lot of times She thought If the Story was true The boys could be destroyed by the Hot Fire
Now she was sad M m Oh boys why did you have to die! She said crying sad Anastasia didn’t like seeing her kind good daughter so sad it made her sad to Ana what’s wrong? She cried saying The Hebrew Boys are Dead She smiled happily at her daughter Asa that’s not true about them They’re not dead God saved them by appearing inside the Fire with them Asa smiled The Boys are alive? They sure are
zswqjnmklpcx chapter 1 . 6/25/2019
Ana! Ae said I want you to meet my family Guys this is my girlfriend Ana She’s Anastasia’s Daughter Hi She felt shy Don’t worry my family is friendly He said smiling this is my Uncle Nebuchadnezzar Ah! She screamed scared He’s evil! Woah Ana Calm down Ae Said laughing He’s not evil But He murdered your Father in the Fiery Furnace! Don’t you remember that? Ha ha I do remember that But my Uncle is friendly he just wants to meet you Nice to meet you Ana um hi she said laughing shyly I heard about you And you destroyed the Boys? Now Ana who told you This about me? Your Nephews Cm and Ds told me when I asked them what you did to their Dads they told me that You got so angry that you tied them up and threw them in the Furnace! And they even said that you made it seven times hotter than usual! Now now Ana I can explain all of this
Lexa-Jean-Skywalker chapter 1 . 10/17/2018
This was so sad and sweet at the same time, I mean it's horrible to hear about what the guys went through, but I loved that they were standing up for each other and that Ben was there for Mal when she needed him.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/1/2018
This was so freaking awesome m!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
Maleficent may be the mistress of evil but cruelly was a worse parent to Carlos than maleficent was to mal. All maleficent did was teach mal how to be her and mal not live up to her expectations and mal was probably punished for this but not on a daily basis unlike Carlos, even jay had it worse than mal being forced to steal for jafar or be hurt and not receiving the nessecary things and he had to steal to survive and while they all had to mal and Evie had a more luxurious life with mal being the daughter of the mistress of evil not much people could cross her with getting hurt and most people were intimidated by her as well as Carlos being bullied,abused and manipulated
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
Correction, Carlos can only has had it worse than any of them the wikia even says so
AndiKaneUnderwood chapter 1 . 4/9/2018
I really like this book, I do, I swear. But because I'm a stickler for facts and cannon, I have to inform you that it wasn't Male who had it the worst on the isle. It was actually Carlos. I agree that they all had it bad, but Carlos had it the worst. I think the Guest below had listed all the reasons, so please go check that out, and I'm sorry if I've stepped out of line, I just had to get that out.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
You do know it's cannon that Carlos had it worst out of all of the VKs and that he was basically enslaved by his mother right? And how he only had a only mattress surrounded by bear traps in cruella's wardrobe of furs to sleep on and how it's canonly stated in the books that cruella care more for her furs, or comforts rather than Carlos and she views his as a slave

He wasn't just manipulated by cruella- he was neglected and enslaved by her, and all of that is canon in the books.
You got that Carlos is more sensitive right but not why. Carlos, unlike every other VK on the isle, was never taught how to be evil but how to be a victim as he treated as such by being controlled and enslaved by cruella most of his life.

Sorry if this is long but it annoys me when people disregard the facts and what the characters went through just because they favour one character, sorry to the author but you've obviously read the books
mptrdxcfwszvhbmltp chapter 1 . 1/14/2018
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Oh daddy this my new girlfriend Mea J said who is her Father? Jafar asked oh her Father is M the Hebrew Boy . Your Father is one of the H Boys isn’t he? M hm he is. Um Mea would you like to join us for lunch? I would love to I brought my friends to. Okay Mea see you at lunch mwah J said kissing his girlfriend okay love you J Mea said.
61394 chapter 5 . 12/1/2017
good story
Account 946663 deleted please chapter 5 . 7/26/2017
That was a great story.
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