I think we did not have to have the getting in the car in every detail every time. The reiteration of the conversations is not necessarily either. The reading becomes redundant and boring. I like yours ideas, I just think that you should edit your execution.

I am so happy that Bones and Booth are so happy

This is sweet!

Did you know that you put the same chapter up twice?

Aww the first doctor's appointment

I never get tired of reading stories about when Booth and Brennan first became a couple.

I like it overall, but I feel that you get into too many minute details in their movements and tgat makes tge sentences too abrupt and they lose their fluidity.