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Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 2/14
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then Bella BIT bOTH TEENAGE BEST FRIENDS WITH A GIRL THEN MORE THEN vOLTURI FOUND HER TRACKING THEN attacked with them the PACK With her Drained of supermazoiions MURDERED Were Freed of Bittyen bodies suddenlyu herself screamed but glowing this one is good thenb TORN Thenfrom bodies taken from here then created as all of Guards then suddenly the three were a army found five unturned turn then both then executed but Exploded into flames brought the very chared up bittenbodies as all of them drained then herself was so pale very ligter skinned was paler her Bright Red eyes Alice who are they we need helop then blackeed out popped from the bodies and the lliving world then blazing from here unable to return to families crashed from here then blown up from bodies taken from here reported they gathered allies witneses with donated kids kiled then blown from severed from them that no longer alive then were as all of them supermazillions then crasheed as all of from around the world lost as all of them took from more than blood taken then smashed then too late brought in here then lot of years passed they were frozen as all of snakes then blown freely they werre in America with American all followed them but too late Destroyed then brought bodies with both shatted never died were different but special then crashed from here shattered then brought in here reported she recurited more with her gift is mental the rarest one acted like she turned Bree Tanner is dead with her with them illegally bring them that was it murderered then killed as all of them but it was too late the bodies skinned alive but Alice had a vision oh my god newest cut Carlisle they are what Immortal then blazcked out freed from here but unable to die were hosts they never rest in peace wanderers and nomadic then crashedripped from the real living world brought in here murderednow they posed as humans each guad found them dead ripped them alive then torn then Blasting then no longer mortal anymore free of all shattered then Smashed then uable to have more kids were severous from families friends and loved ones poped then taken but they awakened deceased but unable to reside no longer crashed from bodies freed from help the bodies poisoned aging too far gone then placed them into California the Families friends and loved ones found them dead then Bella with more than as all witnessed events and changes they were buried but the cause murder grieved of dreams lost in the Vulcan way herself with as all youth never die of hosts they were on Vulcan with things deported they had stopped aging they survived on a harsh desert planet there they met exiles unable to recall to Earth once more now the bodies brought in here were killed but stoped the guards they reported they all of thembuilt a galactic army they were caught they are as all killed with her with them but exploded they bring them good now too late murdered they cut them from here more gurads exploded now families on Vulcan banished with child weere so ill but had them earlier.
kouga's older woman chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
Loved it, more please
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
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it came too late each both states Venom suddenly mixed and the both half-ssister with three phased with as all of then suddenly a more monstrous Full moon The senior Volturi guard found as all of them deceased had them Executed for both entering then POPPED AND v crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrunched! rEALLY deeply THEN bitten! Then the Ancient Greek Gods and Goddesses Freed them with each both and then letting Venom suddenly transformed nto a bridge then Shattering by TIME-RIPPING AND SPLIT Then took each both and suddenly Bella and her sister screaming of a Bite onto their both sides of their own necks Ankles and Wrists and with them suddenly emerging their planet powwrs then letting the Ven enter their dying but frail hearts then popprd freely then popped then taken from them the Seer found them dead but Attacked CARLISLE! Then it was too late they were one of them followwd next with them BLAZING From their own bodies came too late removed memories of their human lives they forbidden them to phase they did you broken our law and rules Cullens of newborn imprints Felix Destroy them then then Died together popped freely then shattering their screams was a real execution popped from life to death officially take te Corpses from America you will live as members cut from your tribe are CURSED With DEATH! They blacked out then popped from te earthly but mortal bodies officially with pets with young wit mates with child shattering then crashing ten took them from here then the Bites of as all of tem then all of the sudden a Alien light began glowing more monstrous and the most powerfull but strongest then popped freely blacked outside from te both phased bodies These ones broken our rules have planet pwers you want trouble pal you lookin' at a it the name is trouble beware the wrath of Sailor JUPITER! JUPITR , I CALL THE FORCES OF NATUTE AND STORMS TO VANQUISH THIS EVIL SUPREME THUNDER CRASH! Blacked out wIH HER HALF-SISTER With them blasting from the real earthly but mortal bodies then taken their chances then their own women went into labor Caused Bella to have a mmuse system to control her bloodlust then swore the Hippocrates oath in Greek as all of languages both as all then then suddenly Children birthed were toddlers the tribe had made changes to te treaty a brand new way to hunt better then popped freely then taken from here to Italy they returned with the corpses but teir as all of scuts and witnesses destroyed from both sisters planetary abilities in te dead of niht blacked out and all of the sudden bursrting freely lost te blood and all of them as all of tribes then came the bodies the kids as all of them look and acted Seven years old but tey all of as all of kids followwd then blacked out then [popped with Covens and packs reappeared then all of them came with corpses then too late Guards bitten freely ten too late drained and flayed for coats as all of them then shattering off teir own heads made immortal off ically went a sharpest but the loudest snapping break phaser blasting as all of the corpses ten too late freed more than as all of them decree them Extinct then too late reported tey are with te blood of te gods and goddesses had Hybrid children are immortal children blasting freely perished with as all of them with their own popped from the living world Accused of as all of crimes then too late bring them as all of tem that was it killed as all of them was Phaser blasting officially more highiest then destroyed as all of them bt it really happened more guards as all of tem with the looks and voices it's done they never existed but they found witnesses as all of them followd but crashing from life to death officially for real but for good but they blacked out ten popped from mortal bodies bring them then too late they wwrre as all of trizallions or more than as all of tem accused they were not guliy they killed them as all of of them phaser blastingblasting as all of the guards very as all of tem each thrty-two thousands or more freed then popped the bodies in five then too late caused a lot of changes the Seer had a vision a horrift ying one Alice we never existed but brought witnesses they are not guilty they brought as all of children aged again [ppopped is a more largest Coven-Pack kingdom we are Kindred tey are Galactic Lycans too late popped freely blacked out then crunching freely lost their Earthly bodies taken then toolate they had them as all of tem killed fra om around the world had them exiled had friends and allies took teir places then it really happened as all of tem the more they get the Vampires tey gotten exploded was poisoned then too late tey all of tem reported tey adapt and thrive lke Borg drones but they blacken veinseve executed as all of them popped from te real living realm bring them then too late murdered and destroyed then too late the bodies all of them aged but wwre as all of tem into wax buried as all of them but it really happened te spirits forced tem to go on a Spiritual quest tey wre Ikmmortal by now as all of tem blacked out then snapped freely lost te ablity to have more kids then it was too late living overextremely longest life spans ten blasting freely tey remained young-looking were much more older but the Ancient but oldest creatures of te nirt ten popped from here ten snapped from the families friend and loved ones and tribe ten popped freely then taken then all of te sudden they were Pierced Immortal beings unable made them three times stronger greater than normal then popped freely then unable to die or age and grow old and never gotten sick at all then popped from the sleeping corpses then taken as all of them killed but more than as all of ten suddenly Alice's Worst be-Science Fiction movie scream was heard then Ouch! oh no Le-Matya he was afraid of a Interorganic one it spoke you look tasty when you are Eaten it screamed then SLAM! Sir! we had been resurrected and the seer is coming oh my god I look yung again Dang it Rose you look sassy he was earned by a whack herself freaked out oh my god nice hair style Dawn you look different we are Immortal now what Chil out Alie Bella you look different oh eahyour hair is cut in a style thank you I look like Kaiou Michiru I need te ips to look like her what is that in your hand it reappeared I see te end I must prevent the end to prevent the deity of destruction herself had a power to sense evil her freshly but styled hair was cut differently looked from the reprinted manga her looks had been alter a sudden glowing symbol was shining was a shape of a trident ten herself yelled NEPTUNE PLANET POWER! MAKE-UP! a roaring current of a violent sea raging she transformed so her half sister as Sailor Jupiter then her hair color turned Seaweed green in seconds then her speech Protectd by Neptune the planet of Oceans Guardian of the Seas protector of Princess Serenity's descendant ruler of Triton castle I am te elegant Sailor Soldiers walks with Grace and poise I am Sailor Neptune on the behalf of the most glorious Silver Millennium I will Punish YOU! it really forged a most radiant golden tiara flying onto her forehead she's a shield Proteted by Jupiter the planet of storms and nature Guaedian of Coruage and Protection ruler of Io castle I will make you reget it iam SAILOR JUPITER! On the behalf of the most glorious Silver Millennium I will PUNISH YOU! That was it tey had planetary abilities but wwrre gifted cursed with bitter immortality and death oh my god you look different oh yeah you want trouble pal the name is trouble beware of the wrath of Sailor Jupiter the pretty suited guardian of Protection is HERE! Good god she is with Herculean strength is tall but really by the way Seth you remind me of my last boyfriend he sweated buillets of her way of talking like a Anime character oh my god she is really strong I am a goner Bella she is my half-sister and all has phased as well I got nwest blood frm my host and you too you look different Alice what is it tey are training but tey ae coming to America then pessed out ten blacked outside ten popped lost the as all of bodies then brought tem here reported we found two changed but phased Shifter/Vampire slayers escaped from here my brother executed two but withthem without bodies are dying with tem are turned illegally here he comes with the Accused but tey will die now ten too late torn off teir as all of then suddenly popped frely more than as all of guads bitten fro here ten it caused tem as all of them to explode then too late Murdered then killed off unable to be slain c ued with Bitter Death officially teir hearts stopped beating they had Red eyes so they ten first hunt as both race ten popped from here ten in the few days crashing poisoned then crashing now officially undead for good each four sibling all of tem blasting outside then snapped forth from te ne ow deceased bodies taken now brought in here killed ten came too late Everything's changed but really different crashing from te bodies lost then taken from here tey found them guilty of as all of more members as all of them caused death of families friends and loved ones and tribe followd reincarnated then snapped freely officially ten too late tey were a species as all of tem shattering freely then it aleady too lae te bodies as all of tem very as mazillions or more brout in ten killed off ten popped freely a different Earth and it was evolving again then too late lost te ablity shattered from te living realm then popped but in teir lab ten caused a lot of reincarnates as all of tem but it really happened shattered as a brand-nwest race evolved then poped from here te each as all of the Paranormal beings emerged popped
Alexxa King chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
Seems cool! can't wait to see what happens you need a beta please lemme know.