Reviews for Harry Potter: Potter Verse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() good book, became a smut later sadly and then dropped by author |
![]() ![]() ![]() What is it with author and abuse? EVERY character that is supposed to make reader feel sympathy is being or was EXTREMELY abused. There are other ways to make reader feel emotions. That one is just repetitive and boring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() abandoned fic |
![]() ![]() bonne fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I was liking this version but then again it's your story this one definitely has merits it also has its spotty areas but those are few and far in between |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say I love the fairy tail reference |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to see him With Alice from resident evil as a secondary player |
![]() ![]() ![]() Should have gotten a lot more EXP from the Bolgan considering it was 13 levels higher than he was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was ok with the fic until he turned it into a kinda bad lemon with an 11 year old Harry Potter and every female character he could figure out how to vaguely manipulate into a scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a shit show still fucking two-goody-shoos beta bitch Harry fuck off with this trash heep |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dungeons, the worst thing to happen to HP/MCU/DXD fanfiction. Gamer novels are great but why people insist on dungeons where they aren't needed I'll never know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you change the year or Harry's birthday? He's supposed to be 11 when he attended Hogwarts for his first year but you had him turn 12 on his birthday instead of 11 so either it's 1992 instead of 1991 or Harry was born 1979 instead of 1980. Hogwarts starts a year later than in the books in either case because everyone should be 11 when they start first year. I hope you address this in later chapters because now I'm a bit confused about the timeline. |