Reviews for Harry Potter: Potter Verse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that's not what a bogart is... /facepalm |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's LUK! not LUC.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ghost Rider comes to get rid of Voldocunt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Having a good time reading this. Always enjoy a nice gamer story, especially if it doesn't just follow the canon plot chapter by chapter. My only real complaint is his stupidly high regen rates. 20%/min - he fully recovers after 5 minutes... completely nullifying the need for HP pots or the you slept in a bed and recover 100%... |
![]() ![]() ![]() When the person talking changes you need to start a new paragraph. |
![]() ![]() ![]() UK schooling typically starts with a reception year, which starts at age 4. Year 1 starting at age 5, and so on until you leave school at 16 at the end of Year 11. If Harry doesn't start school until 7, that would be year 3, meaning he's missed 3 years of schooling at that point. |
![]() ![]() Es bueno autaliza pronto |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really interesting and I really I would made this part 1 until maybe the Troll and then pass to part two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() About sex I only please ask you that he won’t have any with the girls his age until he is third year they are not ready, he is more an adult than they are(he is more like 14 like 12). Also really look rituals he could do thanks to the girls are virgins to help them be stronger for the thing to come (maybe a coven or something) About Albus I think good intentions go to hell and Dumbledore never really left his old goals he simply change them to dark to grey. He is manipulating old British from the kids to wizangamont |
![]() ![]() ![]() Irma was not in distress to form a bond, it was not life or death situation. She was only happier or less happy. I really like it, but Find Harry too young, I hope he doesn’t have real penetrating sex until 14 because the girls at his side are really 12 and 13, except for Penny also Harry is still too young, 14 is an ideal age, as the ratio he is growing he will be almost grown the girls will be more mentally prepared and with the talk an potion also they can have time to look into rituals that can be beneficial if use with virgins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I know this story is complete, but I still have to ask. Why didn't he just use lightning instead of fire? Golden armor and shields can block fireballs really well but gold is one of the best conductors of electricity around. It doesn't matter if he hit the sword shield or body, he would get zapped and maybe stunned either way. Other than that great fight. |
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