Reviews for Harry Potter: Potter Verse
Camillus Seth chapter 7 . 8/28/2021
'WOT DA FUQ' Harry said in a fake French accent.
Camillus Seth chapter 3 . 8/28/2021
Pussies are very flexible, Harry, very very flexible.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/14/2021
Really wish this story was finished, it's too good to be left as is!
Mastersgtjames chapter 10 . 6/14/2021
Uh... really dislike Nimuae, as well as the frankly, flat, attempt at mystery with the 7 "presences" and all that.
Hope MC becomes a Metamorph somehow. Also hope Tonks and Parvati join his Harem. Twins man... Twins...

Lastly.
Really hope the author picks this story back up.
Mastersgtjames chapter 8 . 6/14/2021
Nimuae feels like she should have just been an NPC that existed only until MC left that dungeon.
Hope MC is practicing Wandless magic.
Mastersgtjames chapter 7 . 6/14/2021
Never liked Lavender. She just was never an attractive character to me.
Hope MC gets good at Finances and theft. Then he could invest in the muggle & magical world, while also robbing from the death eaters.

Okay, now for my obligatory Hope's and Idea's comment/rant.

First off, Hope MC learns more than just what is taught at Hogwarts. Learn Conjuration, Alchemy, Wards, Cursebreaking, Enchanting, Sex Magic, Blood/Flesh Magic, Soul Magic, Mind Magic, Rituals.

Also hope MC can figure out SOME way to gain magical gifts, as well as immortality. Both are things that should be possible. I mean, Horcruxes, philosopher stones, those are both over 700 years old, so you would think that with modern science/medicine that people could come up with newer, better methods. Maybe not purebloods, due to the disdain on muggles, or most magicals, due to the lacking "muggle" education, but a SI has no such excuse.
As for the Magical Gifts, they had to start at some point, most likely due to someone performing some kind of ritual, so trying to figure out a ritual to become a metamorph, get mage sight, parseltongue, or veela allure, or Re'em strength should be possible. Especially with living examples to borrow from. Like maybe studying Tonks, or using her blood to become one.

Aside from that, there is the simple fact that killing voldie and his Death Eaters should be really easy. I mean, once you have even one of his Horcruxes, you should be able to kill him. If someone having your blood is bad. Since they can curse it, and though it, you. Torturing you, even killing you. Then having a piece of someone soul HAS to be worse. You should be able to kill ALL of voldemort if you have even one of his horcruxes. Same with his DE's, since they have the Dark Mark, and ALL the Dark Marks are connected, you should be able to target them through that connection.

Not sure if the MC in this story if gonna go for a Harem or anything like that. But my personal favourite romance interests are Tonks, Fleur, Hermione, and the Patil Twins.
Mastersgtjames chapter 6 . 6/14/2021
So... for starters... not a fan of it when Gamer stories do a party system. It almost always, in some asinine way, leads to the MC being always weaker/worse than his party members. Like them getting skills/stats SIGNIFICANTLY easier than the MC. Then the other issue is when, as is the case here, something/someone from a dungeon joins the MC's party, or leaves the dungeon. Which massively bloats/derails the story/setting. Cuz then you have to rework it all to try and make sense of it, while somehow still keeping the same setting, history, abilities, and what-not.
Mastersgtjames chapter 5 . 6/14/2021
Honestly wish the author had not done this. It does not fit with the theme/character. I mean, why would MC go into a Dungeon several levels higher than himself.
Mastersgtjames chapter 1 . 6/14/2021
Really?... Sue Storm, Matt Murdock, Steve Wilson? cmon author. lol
Crazy Girl Writer chapter 10 . 6/3/2021
Second time I've read this and second time I was sad there wasn't more. I hope you come back to it soon cause it's really good!
Reader chapter 10 . 5/28/2021
Things will quickly turn bad when Harry finally get the Marauder's Map from the terror twin because the twins will annoyingly keep persisting in finding out Harry's secrets (it's their nature). Same case with Dumbledore. And Snape. And Quirrel. Many people actually.

Actually I thought Harry's Occlumency level wasn't so high because of how easy (instaneous) the Sorting Hat intruded into his mind. That's weird.

Life Bonds shouldn't be so easy to appear. It's absolutely acceptable for Penny and Hermione because they were saved from mortal peril, but why would the other girls also get it without even being in immediate vicinity?

Harry shouldn't have any injuries (like the burns and love bites) or bad statuses (like Mana Burn and the Horcrux) because he has already slept many times already. That "basic" Gamer's absolute restoration should have freaked out many people (especially Madam Pomfrey and Dumbledore after Harry defeated the troll).

On that note, I couldn't even fathom why Harry almost died just because of a measly troll considering how easy the canon Harry and co. defeated it even though they were all much much weaker than Harry and Penny in this fanfic. Not to mention the uber stronger Harry (boosted by the calmness of Gamer's Mind), Penny alone should have been strong enough to defeat the troll.

Dumbledore should have already been informed by Mrs. Figgs about Harry's bearings and capabilities. He should also have been already aware of the movements of Potters' assets considering that he's still Harry's magical guardian (there was nothing mentioning that he stopped being that).
DGJabberwocky chapter 10 . 5/1/2021
This getting an update? and will the like of Angelina, Alicia and Katie join the harem even though they are Gryffindors?
Ashmodai chapter 6 . 4/14/2021
Sure 1065000 in galleons after a few basic quests and the first dungeon with level recommendation of 10...
Gary1078 chapter 10 . 3/18/2021
I love the story. I really wish you would continue it. It is a really good read.
BayerClan chapter 7 . 3/9/2021
This has potential plz update soon
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