Reviews for Harry Potter: Potter Verse |
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![]() ![]() I like this story |
![]() ![]() Hope you update this fic, cause it is great. The only Harry Potter gamer fic with lemons taht is good that comes to mind. The only negative things about this fi. That I have found is the fact that it a lot of the characters have a dark history (abused, attempted rape, attempted murder, ...) and the fact that you are having many things going on at the same time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...this is where I drop. You need to go back and re-read your chapters to find the plothole you made. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea was too ambitious and he wasn’t good enough of a writer to execute it flawlessly. The numerous grammatical and spelling errors and some inconsistencies in the abilities can attest to that. Another problem I had was the number of times harry checked his status, I’m sure the word count is this high because of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What u mean is descent, not decent |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s knocturn alley |
![]() ![]() Please can you upload, the story was getting really good. One of the better Harry Potter gamer fanfictions. One question though what did you mean by only buying 20% of the shares under each name it doesn’t make much sense can you explain more abou this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() the skill trees is trash you shouldn't add this trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() will there be more of this story? |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. Probably best of its kind. Wish it wasn’t abandoned. |
![]() ![]() Waiting on Chapter 11 man. Hope it’s awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update. I very much enjoy this story! |
![]() ![]() Can you please continue this amazing fanfic? |