|Reviews for Behind the Masquerade|
| Yazmanian Devil chapter 33 . 7/18
I really appreciate how you developed the feelings of the characters. Although a month is a short time, it is still more realistic in how you grow to care & love someone. Although I would've loved to read about how they got married and potentially had kids, I love how you ended them being together but not together. It left things to imagine. Great read & very well written. Thank you
| KrayKrayKat chapter 29 . 4/20/2015
I didn't review till now. Because this is old and you already have so many and idk I just move from chapter to chapter, wanting to know more. That's a compliment.
But what I liked what how you conveyed almost everything through those last lines. A clean cut.
So I guess I don't need to say you write really well, you've been told already, but regardless you do.
Here's hoping that you'll come back to wroting someday soon.
| MadamScorpio chapter 19 . 1/10/2015
ok...intense..but seriously...how is this an inukag when a very important part is erm...dead? i try not to say much about the happenings in a review but there was no skirting around the issue...
| Dusty-Evals chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
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| Amara chapter 20 . 8/3/2013
Sobbing even harder now. "How could you?! Did you not remember his sword!? You must DIE! You caused all of your fans pain!" Starts crying even harder, if that's possible.
| Amara chapter 19 . 8/3/2013
Amara: sobbing "How could you kill Kagome! I thought she and Inuyasha were going to fall in love! Your as bad as Shakespeare, with Inuyasha the Romeo, and Kagome the Juliet! Go die in a hole! I'll never forgive you!"
Friend: "Now, calm down. Did you forget something?"
Amara: "No! I won't calm down, and I didn't forget anything!"
Friend: "I believe you did..."
Amara: "Ok then, genius, what did I forget?"
Friend: "How did they raise an entire army?"
Amara: slaps forehead "I can't believe I forgot Sesshomaru's sword! I'm an idiot!"
Friend: thinks- 'Isn't Inuyasha an idiot too? So, would that be a complement?'
| Amara chapter 14 . 8/2/2013
| Amara chapter 11 . 8/2/2013
Die! Die! DIE! How could you! What's Kikyo's motive, anyway! DIE!
| Amara chapter 10 . 8/2/2013
She should runaway. Her home SUCKS, and her sister is at the one place she can stand. Sango Shippo and Miroku would go with her I'm sure.
| Amara chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
"You are cruel." Sniff sniff, bursts into tears. "He's supposed to fall in love with Kagome!
| Amara chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
| jaimed1968 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
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| DeLisle chapter 33 . 4/21/2013
No a/n? I'm heartbroken.
Fade to black…
| DeLisle chapter 19 . 4/21/2013
"You just love keeping us in the shadows, don't you?" She asked sadly. It wasn't a question. Wistfully, she added "But you're still quite the writer, huh Keolla?"
Fade to black…
| ChillinLikeaVillain chapter 33 . 3/2/2013
Beautiful story! Too bad no Sesshomaru/rin..