Hey, yes this is you story but went you borrow the characters from another author you have to respect them. We read the ficts because we love their personality, If you going to made them complete OOC is better is you create your own. Wonder who is going to read your story?

I thought this chapter was pretty perfect. The characters all reacted how I thought they would & I liked their little . Actually, I was almost surprised her parents didn't bring up the marriage at the funeral. I'm really hoping that "black cloud" is what I think it is because she promised her life to Naraku so I've been waiting to see if that's going to play into this. After all, she's still his best chance at the Shikon. Though I'd be lying if I said part of me hadn't been hoping she'd somehow just zap back to her body while she was floating & Inuyasha would see it & come for her...

I've been trying to figure out 3 things since she realized the wolves were coming. 1) Where the hell has Shippo disappeared to? He was so reliant on her & then just vanished. 2) When she noticed the castle was about to be secretly attacked, instead of just screaming her head off, why didn't she grab her bow & arrows for at least SOME protection? She seemed pretty confident with them when her & Sango were facing Naraku. 3) The wolves hadn't gotten into the castle grounds yet so if she was running around trying to find Rin & Kikyo, why wouldn't her first thought have been to scream their names to cut down search time?

Other than this, I've really been enjoying this story. Still waiting for him to realize she has his necklace.

Be consistent.
If Sango didn't know Kikyo got engaged, how did she know Kagome would be leaving to another kingdom for a month?

omg! what a roller coaster. if I was him, I would go crazy.

so sad. sniff...

I really appreciate how you developed the feelings of the characters. Although a month is a short time, it is still more realistic in how you grow to care & love someone. Although I would've loved to read about how they got married and potentially had kids, I love how you ended them being together but not together. It left things to imagine. Great read & very well written. Thank you

I didn't review till now. Because this is old and you already have so many and idk I just move from chapter to chapter, wanting to know more. That's a compliment.
But what I liked what how you conveyed almost everything through those last lines. A clean cut.
So I guess I don't need to say you write really well, you've been told already, but regardless you do.
Here's hoping that you'll come back to wroting someday soon.

ok...intense..but seriously...how is this an inukag when a very important part is erm...dead? i try not to say much about the happenings in a review but there was no skirting around the issue...
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Sobbing even harder now. "How could you?! Did you not remember his sword!? You must DIE! You caused all of your fans pain!" Starts crying even harder, if that's possible.

Amara: sobbing "How could you kill Kagome! I thought she and Inuyasha were going to fall in love! Your as bad as Shakespeare, with Inuyasha the Romeo, and Kagome the Juliet! Go die in a hole! I'll never forgive you!"

Friend: "Now, calm down. Did you forget something?"

Amara: "No! I won't calm down, and I didn't forget anything!"

Friend: "I believe you did..."

Amara: "Ok then, genius, what did I forget?"

Friend: "How did they raise an entire army?"

Amara: slaps forehead "I can't believe I forgot Sesshomaru's sword! I'm an idiot!"

Friend: thinks- 'Isn't Inuyasha an idiot too? So, would that be a complement?'

YES!

Die! Die! DIE! How could you! What's Kikyo's motive, anyway! DIE!

She should runaway. Her home SUCKS, and her sister is at the one place she can stand. Sango Shippo and Miroku would go with her I'm sure.