Reviews for The Elvenqueen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this idea! It's so funny too with hermione's staunch disbelief of prophecy, and I'm eager to see where you take it. -HM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I loved the daddy part :) please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, that was hilarious, and i'm not quite certain WHY honestly. but i loved it, to short for my liking but wonderful none-the-less. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() I do like the idea of the trees half mischievously dropping nonsense "prophecies" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my Merlin, this is amazing! I truly cannot get enough. I know you just updated, but I can't wait for chapter 3! |
![]() ![]() This is amazing, and I simply can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh? But a child? I wonder why :) guess you'll elabroate on it later on! I like the chapter so far, and true, usually it's Harry transferred to Middle Earth as an Elven child, and Hermione is usually all grown up :P so it's a nice change. This could be a good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I beg you! Please update soon! This is an amazing start to any fanfic I've ever read! I can hardly wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it very much, a strong start! Can't wait for the next update :) Kudos for your work. P;S: In my opinion, you should change either the color of her eyes or the color of her hair. It would make her change much more startling (Plus, it would be easier to differentiate between human Hermione vs elf Hermione while reading), marking clearly her transition into a new being altogether. And it would be less boring visually too... I don't mean at all that brown hair or eyes aren't beautiful, I really like both, but contrast always work best in this things (blue hair and eyes would be equally boring) Either way, is just a suggesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. Great start can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great, it was small, but great! i would very much love to read more, i hope you plan to continue! |
![]() ![]() Love this story. I hope you keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so love this please continue |
![]() ![]() Fantastic start to this story. Hope this story will continue and that there will be more soon. |