Reviews for Sarah's Wish
kitsune29 chapter 5 . 11/29
I laugh every time I reread this part I love it
Tallis37 chapter 5 . 10/30
This really is quite marvellous. There is a rich backstory and a filling out of the history and rules covering those of the Underground. The Changeling/Muggleborn theory is very interesting and not something I've read before. I am also intrigued to discover what type of Fae Hermione may be. Have the Dark Marks changed in appearance at all as they do seem to feel different? I love how Gareth is so 'other' and disregards the usual conventions and avoids and pre existing expectations of him. I realise it is a very long time since this has been updated but I still wanted you to know how much I enjoyed the chapters you have published. thank you.
APridefulSin chapter 5 . 10/21
he really does give the best presents
APridefulSin chapter 3 . 10/21
pwrcy wished away Fred and George!? that may explain some things about them!
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 2 . 10/17
I LOVE how you take into consideration that the Fae is NOT humans, and therefore will not think and feel and act as such.

(I still remember how accepting a gift from anyone in the Fae realm could easily have you end up as a slave for 100 years just to repay it. A gift must always be countered with a gift of equal value. And saying no might be considered offensive. And offending someone will see you punished. Lol)

Keep writing, PLEASE!

I LOVE this fic! _
TheDemonofChaos chapter 5 . 9/7
I have taken a liking to this story and, will be waiting for more. The last scene with the unintentional wish got a marvelous laugh out of me.
Mushishixxxholic chapter 5 . 8/23
Love it
cutandpaste101 chapter 5 . 7/19
Ooooh, this story is a good one. Thank you for writing! This story is a gift.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23
Oh my gosh! I love this so much! I wish you had continued it!
Seralina chapter 5 . 5/7
I have no idea if this will ever be updated, but it was certainly very interesting!
Yumi Edogawa chapter 5 . 4/18
I love this story! I was going through my old emails and saw this one. I really enjoyed the way he pestered/tricked Hermione into Wishing away the animals he wanted. It was also interesting to see the way he dealt with Snape. It shows he isn't human, not even in mindset, but that he still has his own values, even if they differ from human norm. It would have been kinder if he'd explained more first because the way he explained things could be taken in a misleading way.
Maybe he'll end up tricking Draco into Wishing to meet his mother or father? Or maybe Lucius will invite them to stay with him for a time?
It was also very interesting to see the conversation with Merlin as well as Gareth's musings on what type of changeling Hermione might be. I wonder why he's so convinced she is a changeling? It's possible she has mostly-human magical ancestry instead.
I don't know if you plan to continue this, but I would certainly enjoy it.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/13
Hi there, I read your AN for this chapter and I really really want you to know that this review is not an attempt to "get another chapter" or anything like that.

I have really enjoyed this story so far! You have a very good grasp of "odd" or "flowery" language for Gareth and his family! I wonder if the Dark Mark looks any different for Snape and Malfoy now. This is the second HP fanfic I have read in years after only reading HP stories for years (because JKR is a terrible person who thinks I am too autistic to understand my own gender, but that's a topic for another rant).

Reading your story, stripping away HP's assumed Christianity and abuse apologism is glorious, on top of this being an interesting and well thought out plot.

It's been... a while... since you updated this, and I don't expect anything more, but it was too good *not* to review. 3 happy 2021
montanomoma chapter 5 . 3/26
I love this book! Ignore the negative! If they don’t like it the can stop reading or write their own story! Keep up the wonderful work!
MadMissMim chapter 5 . 3/15
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while! I love the rich environment and richer characters and the expansion on the Rules that govern the Underground. I read the manga that told the further story of Sarah's brother Toby and the characters of the Labyrinth, but this feels like a whole new and wonderfully unexpected but believable direction such a story could have gone. I wish this had been continued, but I will content myself with what there is of it and let my imagination decide what might have been *le sigh*
kitsune29 chapter 5 . 3/2
I love this
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