god damn it why does this always happen to stories... fucking hell it's getting really annoying.

Hola me gusto mucho la historia me gustaría que la siguieras publicando, me gustó el desarrollo de personaje, como incluiste a Tayuya, todo y se ve bien, gracias.

What a cliffhanger from hell.

Never liked how/when people make his "Yin side" a different person. Especially when it's just random as hell. Like it better when he's just using a mask that slowly but surely you see both sides of. Unless you do some Sage bs and make them merge later. Otherwise it's just me waiting for the Yin Naruto to fuck off so we can get back to the original one. Which would typically be considered his "Yang side"

botched.

This shit ass that dark side bull shit is cringe and annoying and you have tsunade act as unless as the third

pls continue this its too good to end like this

NEED MORE THIS IS PEAK

Hey man hope at some point you come back to continue this story. This is by far my favorite Naruto x Tayuya story I've read.

This I have no words for how absolutely fantastic this was especially this chapter it was heartbreaking I know it's probably never gonna happen but I would absolutely love to see this get an update. Absolutely well done.

This is a brilliant story.

Well, damn that was pretty intense lol.

Well, damn this was quite messed up Naruto beat Chojuro easily and then Kurotsuchi almost kills Konohamaru and then tells Naruto about his dad, damn that's messed up and he almost kills her, but he did kill the proctor he's not gonna get away with that, so I'm wondering what will happen next, it's messed up Korotsuchi should be punished because it's her fault, but Naruto still killed someone he shouldn't have so next chapter sure is gonna be intense.

Well, damn Naruto and Tayuya actually had sex and u didn't let us read about it damn u, now I wonder what happens next.

Well, this was interesting Naruto's full of surprises and Naruto and Tayuya is a cute pairing.