|Reviews for Silly Songbird|
| XDBOI chapter 7 . 5/4
| TheDragon2000 chapter 18 . 4/18
Definitely one of the best SI stories I've ever read. It's quite sad to see it get abandoned. Anyways, Thanks for sharing!
| DIOchu chapter 18 . 4/17
Nasuverse magic when?
| Curse Of Kings chapter 18 . 4/11
This story is really good! Why'd you stop writing it?
| Death Lantern chapter 6 . 4/3
He still is a pathetic villain. sigh!
| Darkepyon chapter 2 . 3/29
Ok I got to say this was painful that family scene was horrible to read it was vastly confusing and overly complicated and why would he not be having relations with his peerage he has no conditions on his virginity and since they are longer lived the engagement could have taken years in the anime he forced the issue why would he have been waiting there devils he seduced his whole peerage
| Weebshitt chapter 18 . 2/24
This is swag
| Skyegrave chapter 5 . 1/19
Welp, this is too stupid for me to continue to read.
I recomend that next time maybe you should make an original story, even if you rip off characters from someone else's work. Your unwillingness to play with the material and not only refusing to give a shine to it, or change it or contort it is a small shame, but not quite as as big as your belief that your made up bull is more interesting than any of that.
Not the worse thing i've read, but nothing else. Hell, not even remarkable by power fantasy standards!
| kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 1/14
i dont really understand why MC went that route in conversation with rias, it served no real purpose especially after the rating game was set.
| Unbenannt chapter 1 . 1/5
You gonna come back anytime soon?
| AestasWinter chapter 17 . 1/3
Its kinda turned into a joke of a story tbh. You have followed canon religiously it's hard to read. You have made absolutely no meaningful changes...
Why does the mc constantly train and help rias etc? Other than following canon like a lost dog she has constantly cheated on him... he has kissed others however none has seen him naked etc... rais has done way way way more than he ever has.
Also, why does everyone continue someone who only loves tits? This has shown to be a more realistic approach while still following canon. So how tf does he randomly gain girls left and right? It makes no sense... all in all, you are still following canon... There have been absolutely no changes to the timeline. Everything is still following canon.
| Draegoon chapter 7 . 1/2
okay shit got real, then it got emotional, then it got just a bit crazy. i guess the best way to describe it is in this sentence "Damn boy, you can write!"
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/30/2020
Are u stil active?
| phelipebr chapter 8 . 12/31/2020
| Chisaki Kouu chapter 18 . 12/23/2020
Good story, I very much enjoyed it, but as others have said before me, extremely disjointed.
I do not understand why he kissed Valerie, at all. My headcanon is that it was for getting her affinities or powers through saliva, or whatever the thing was he brought up to his family at the start of the story. Or maybe she was just that hot to him.
Thats the biggest one. Also, when you start on new scenes, you take so long to let us to get even an inkling on how the fuck the specific scene relates to the previous one or the story. I still do not understand the scene where Ophis was being "maternal" while SOMEONE slept, talking to someone wanting her freedom, and having became wise since ages past. You literally said that the young man sleeping was BROWN haired, hence, I can't decide if it was a typo, or for some reason, Ophis was praising the amazing planning of Issei.
But as I said, I liked this story a lot. Many scenes were straight up epic, while other scenes were dreadfully long and boring; so while not lacking flaws, I think you did a good job. Only referring to it with finality as it seems to me it's dropped.