You said mc is an idiot savant, yes?
what branch of magic will he specialize in?

Its Dogshit, do not bother.

I have no words to say, especially negative ones, it's smooth well crafted, I dare to say flawless

This was a fantastic story while it lasted.I haven't seen your profile yet so I don't know if you have other stories up, but I look forward to checking it out.

Verbal diarrhea splashed out over 18 chapter to an unfinished plot.
Don't bother, no seriously, don't.
You'll waste 5 hours on a washed up story like I just did and think, why did I bother.

dropped... too much blah blah blah and its only ch 2

With all due respect, what is bro yappin about. I was hoping this story would be great. It started out so strong. One of the best premises I've seen in the dxd fanfic realm. But after the rating game, what the fuck happened? Feels like half the story is just us reading about risers inner monologue and scheming. 50% of the time it makes no fucking sense and the other 50 its boring as hell. It feels like the chapters never make it past the rough draft stage before they are posted. Hell, not even past the outline. The plot is convoluted beyond my comprehension and it completely ruins it.

anymore Yakitori updated?

pls continue.

Sorry, but that was just fucking dumb. Why is he doing the same shit as Canon Riser? That makes no sense at all. The world is already irrevocably changed, so there is no point at all in acting like that. He should have just called off the stupid engagement and ignored Rias and her peerage entirely. Everything about that situation is just an utter waste of time.

On another note, the fact that he was practically defeated by his own bishop, despite having such OP magic at his disposal, is pathetic.

First off, incest is wincest :D.

Secondly, I really hope that the MC isn't actually trying to be with Rias. Who would want to be with a girl that so easily gives in to the whims of a pervert (like Issei)? She basically seduces him into doing whatever she wants by showing off her body...definitely not waifu material. She's kind of a slut...in fact, most of the girls from DxD are...

Also, I really hope the MC isn't always so scatter-brained... To use TIME MANIPULATION just to have an internal monologue is pretty dumb. I hope he can channel some of his insanity into making himself OP.

Finally, couldn't he just put himself to sleep with a spell? That should be like, really easy compared to time manipulation and teleportation.

Pretty strange way to go about 'explaining' his new personality. Without any knowledge of Riser's life, he would have probably been better off going with partial memory loss or something. Nevertheless, this seems to have turned out alright, even if by sheer luck.

On another note, the magic system seems completely broken. I look forward to see how OP he can get in a short amount of time.

So he is stuck with a peerage of weaklings who were originally handpicked to each fulfill a harem stereotype...

Your story is completely nonsensical, half of it is already just paragprahs of description of how beautiful a character is blah blah blah with repetition for each entrance of character , and poetic nonsense with no meaning but only redundant words for the sake of the illusion of something.

If he becomes powerful enough to surpass the dragon gods I’m going to get annoyed. Though this is obviously abandoned so not like it matter. Also his goal is in no way unique to his character seeing how every single setting like this is exactly the same of power hungry idiot MC who only cares about power because writers can’t be bothered to actually care about an actual story and character interactions.