Reviews for Silly Songbird
titobeansz chapter 2 . 6/26/2016
This. This is what I need to see apart from all those shitty OOC OP OC Self Inserts written by 7 year olds. That and the other really good ones (which I'm sure I added into my favs already) I've seen this only once before, and I'm pretty fired up to see it once more. (Ba dum tss) Anyway, my Yakitori is almost done, so I must go. Bye bye~
Geasszero chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
incredible, I hope to see as follows and the meeting between P. Raiser and Rias. To me in particular I would like to particularly Rias outside Raiser, just with fake harem ise idiot.
Geasszero chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
I like this chapter
Hiei-Uchiha chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
I will definitely be adding your story to my favorite list! Keep it up!
Warlord of Chaos chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
Man, dxd fandom Needs more serious stories like this, great work! And I'am looking forward the next chapter
wahyubison chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
man just make rias losing her power base in kuoh that will make gremory losing great deal a power
kukuku that place is centre of important event inb dxd verse
TheAbsoluteMonarch chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
When is this taking place? You haven't really given us a time frame other than it be before engagement was broken off. If its before Issei is killed I would recommend that you have your character take the boosted gear for himself. There is not enough stories where the protagonist is willing to take what he could even have it where he takes it a moment before Rias shows up to reincarnate him.
matrience chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
Thanks for the chapter, I like how you make so world building with the magic.

I don't know if it has been explained how sairaorg has a sacred gear maybe you can invent a reason and give one to riser?
Exis21 chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
I feel like your SI is a bit paranoid about the universe he's in. Though I guess he has a right to be with his current predicament. I hope that he sees that Riser wasn't all bad and I hope that he becomes a super devil (marmalade and all).
spagtag chapter 2 . 6/24/2016
Good chapter
Zaralann chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
You have potential here...
marsolino chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
Interesting. Keep going
Myo124 chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
I love it! Keep up good work.
wahyubison chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
well a phenex with combination of chakra,touki, and elemental magic will make equalibrium collapse
kukukuku fourth super devil in the making
man riser's peerage are hot enough for me for example yubelluna body not lose against rias or akeno
well with OC riser in dxd world a lot of interesting scenario i cannot wait for your story
spagtag chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Great start cant wait for the nxt chapter.
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