| Reviews for The House of Badgers |
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   Cateagle chapter 16 . 11/6/2017 Ah, good to see that Hermione has acknowledged that "wake up call" and done something to change herself. It should be interesting to see who else learned appropriate lessons; it is glaringly obvious that the youngest two Weasleys have not. |
| Cateagle chapter 3 . 11/5/2017 All in all, a very sobering wake-up call for Ms. Granger. I wonder if she's going to be able to change her behaviors. |
| Cateagle chapter 1 . 11/5/2017 Well, I have to admit this is a different take on the Tournament. I don't believe I've seen it used elsewhere by Harry to switch Houses (I've seen him switch Houses, but for other reasons). |
| HoneyBear84 chapter 22 . 10/27/2017 Love it, but wish it had a future epilogue |
| Kimmytrainer chapter 22 . 10/27/2017 Aww you didn't go into the horcruxes or integrating Lily and James into the modern world. Hmm. Oh well. This story still has a lot of potential for a sequel or something. Your grammar could use some improvement, but other than that I really enjoyed it :) thanks for writing! |
| Kimmytrainer chapter 21 . 10/27/2017 Only one chapter left? How's everything going to fit? |
| Kimmytrainer chapter 20 . 10/27/2017 Whoa. Out of everything it's Fawkes being James's familiar that surprises me lol |
| kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 1 . 10/26/2017 Awesome story so far |
| BillBrink chapter 22 . 10/26/2017 When you got rid of Albus, Snape, and the threats to Harry's life, I thought, "Why is this story going on for another 4 chapters?" But I really like your ending. It was a fun read and I thank you sharing it. |
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/17/2017 update |
| Time Emperor chapter 9 . 10/18/2017 I'm a little on the fence about this story. I thought that Harry asking Susan to be his girlfriend was a little too fast. |
| RavenNoire78 chapter 22 . 10/14/2017 Needs a sequel |
| Osmodious chapter 22 . 9/26/2017 This is a good story with some real potential...there are interesting ideas that could benefit from fleshing out and greater detail, like the twist near the end (plus the last few chapters feel a bit rushed, throwing off the pacing). The story is very dialogue heavy and would benefit from more exposition...but the greater issue there is that there is seldom any identification of who is speaking the dialogue. You don't have to always write things like 'Harry said...', but can use descriptions to help identify the speaker and provide more atmosphere...Harry raised an eyebrow and asked "Are you serious?" Not the best example, but it shows a bit of what I'm saying. Anyway, good effort, I look forward to you developing as a writer. |
| kelwin chapter 22 . 9/12/2017 good fic I hope you will continue it some day soon |
| Vampireking40 chapter 22 . 9/11/2017 Great story. It needs more to the story at how the tournament finishes. |