You meantand could cause trouble for", "was I horribly abused", "was severe emotional trauma" and "made him feel like a squib".
I wish us readers could have read more about Frank and Alice Longbottom now that they're healed.

You meant "was just one big setup", "Harry bad-mouthing the Dark Lord", "charms around the atrium and DoM", "Its amored body" and "not its native land".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "whyever" should be one word.

You meant "it would take a while to", "doxy up in the rafters", "How the Unspeakables had questioned", "if he didn't cooperate", "treating her like some rookie" and "for some reason or other, attended".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "bestseller" should be one word.

You meant "It was much like a Muffliato", "making a fuss over Malfoy", "wonders for the morale of the school", "duties to perform", "was,due to blood loss", "cleaning Grimmauld Place and sell it", "I miss the elves' cooking", "that Madam Rosmerta showed" and "he asked her how she liked his robes".

You meant "you're ready for your fight tomorrow", "that it affected a great many", "you're like bees", "have the lifespan to learn", "her hands were in fists", "took out a sheaf of paper and", "old and not some battle-hardened warrior", "went head to head with that Umbridge person" and "gave him an advantage".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "short-lived" needed a hyphen.
I had to google to learn what a "bat'leth" looks like.

You meant "weren't as discreet as they thought", "There is no place safer than Hogwarts", "the Statute of Secrets broken", "they switched people's clothing", "who caused all the mess" and "most of them were rich purebloods".
"schoolchildren" in "Giggling like schoolchildren" should be one word, according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from.

Yum! at the thought of that egg salad sandwich Amelia Bones is having.
You meant "make sure we're not disturbed for" and "and his godfather's accounts".
I loved Pomona Sprout's question to McGonagall about what it was that the Hogwarts teachers did for Harry.

Yum at the thought of the cheesy scrambled egg castle Luna built.
You meant "do with an army of doxies" and "The smack caused his eggs to fall".

You meant "magic to use one to find" and "one going to every department".
Yay! you Gringotts goblins for your destruction of two of the horcruxes of Tom Riddle junior.

You meant "or it could be a lot worse", "drapery, until they're removed", "Harry was not impressed", "The whole building reeked of dark magic",get rid of Kreacher", "go to the Malfoys", "It would serve Lucius right", "fulfill Master Regulus' last order", "he felt an overwhelming need" and "And you know us, we".
According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "bloodstream" should be one word.

You meant "Casting a detection charm and following", "find heartbeats", "all the witnesses' reports", "his first priority had", "She put the folder to the side", "doing every day now", "know where you're going" and "my parents' old house, Grimmauld Place".

You meant "and flipped off the transfiguration professor". and "just got through telling me".
I hope with every fibre of my being that Dumbles and McGonagall get into ish past their nostrils about how they treated Harry. ASAP.

You meant "not wanting to be in the house with yelling adults" and "that had not been brought down".
Does Amelia Bones take a very long shower with the strongest soap or shower gel available in magical Britain each time she returns home after questioning Snape? I would have done that if I were her.

You meant "There were no manipulative men", "into his very rigid circle", "would allay her fears", "No matter how safe she felt, she couldn't stop the tears", "His head was lolling like he was drugged", "and now was taut against the bones" and "he had no pity for either one".
Well done, Harry, at contaminating the resurrection potion of Tom Riddle junior so thoroughly.

According to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from "trumped-up" in "trumped-up story" needed a hyphen.
You meant "looked like an oily sakeman, but", "scared ten years off Madam", "The dust and grime that", "I knew the rumors were false" and "Dolores none too gently put the boy".
Damn, at Harry being drugged.
Who in the name of Hades are Fudge and Umbridge handing Harry over to?
How dim-witted could Remus Lupin possibly be?!