I am sorry to write: stopped reading after the first “POV” label…
If an author could not write the story that I would figure out character and his/her “point of view”, but it had to be tagged… - at least the medium was missed: is this a script for a video?

Story alright but author did kind of ruined it. It good enough I finished it but it could had been it better.

Dear Author...

It is Your Story. Tell it however you want to, just don't stop in the middle. I have lost track of the sheer volume of potentially great stories that have been sidelined by some judgmental reviewer. You're not making money off of it and people are not required to read it if they don't like it, as there will be no exam on your story. I like your style of storytelling. Thank-you for sharing it with us all.

Tea Grannie

Nah man... Started well...

But it got very boring after Ministry Kidnapping

I don't know wth is this guy... He creates everything and is basically Merlin reborn... But gets plot-F*ked every time...

I know this is quite an old story ... But ... Imo. Was good in the beginning... Till middle ... But it's like awesome ideas are crushed under the weight of the plot

Two way mirror?
Hell no!
One-way mirror. One way window.

Just a quick note to let you know how much I enjoy your stories. I'm currently rereading them all. Keep writing as your muse allows.
from a fan

This one was hilarious, and i wish there was more!

Thank you for a wonderful story. Is there a sequel? Keep up the good work.

Damn I hate that this story is at the end. You are an amazing storyteller. Keep up the great work. I'm off to read another tale!

It was a fun story, a fabulous balance on the bashing making it seem in character and not silly, and an excellent sequel hook at the end.

I enjoy reading your stories. They bring light and joy. And thoughts. Thank you for the fun times

It's kinda weird, other then the fact that he had such a potion in his stocks Snape is not really at all responsible for Harry's condition, not only was in the potion in a private room behind wards Harry himself took the potion, even if Snape was blamed for it he could quite rightly under verataserum say that he had no idea what the potion would do considering he only intended a 4 drop dose and that he had no part in Harry obtaining said potion.

great story!

amazing story. thank you

enjoyed this story!