Reviews for The Shock of it All |
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grovepjp chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Yx |
delia cerrano chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Okay with me. I will certainly be reading it. But we have to wait a couple of months for the next chapter? Then I hope you will be making it a loooong one. |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Good first chapter but Snape's description of the potion was rather different from the results of Harry taking a swig of it. Thanks for sharing! |
LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Oh, wow! Quite intriguing! Welp, see you in a few months and thank you, so much, for leaving us hangin' off this CLIFFIE!;-D It's a good thing I like you, so much! ;-p Your adoring fan, MelJ |
The Psychotic Bunny chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 wicked first chapter |
danjana chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Oh this is absolutely worth continuing! I can't wait to find out what happens next, Harry can apparently do wandless magic, how did he learn and how long has he been able to? Also, what was Snape doing with what is essentially the Imperius in a bottle and just WHO was he going to use it on? What about Dumbledore and that stupid tournament? I thought the binding of a minor to any contract was illegal or is that just in fanfics and not canon? I don't like Dumbledore, I never understood just WHY he had so much power over Harry's life. I know he has all of these "important" titles in the Ministry, but Harry's better than I am, if someone I just met told me I had to do this, that or the other, (because I said so) I would've told them exactly where they could get off. Headmaster or not, outside of school, Dumbledore would have NEVER been able to tell me what to do. He's not Harry's legal guardian, in no way related to him, so therefore, cannot tell Harry where he can live or what he can do in any way, shape, or form, especially during the summer breaks. |
ctc chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 interesting start! |
ElysiumPhoenix chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 This is great so far and I can't wait to read more. |
Hands Off MY Wolfie chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 You are a cruel person, leave us this teaser and then take time off. Strong Harry and no idea of his situation - it looks like fun - or not :eek:. I hope your time off is helpful and will be looking forward to your stories when you post again. |
Wolfric chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Could be interesting. Thanks for writing. W. |
Thundramon chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Love the start, hope it turns out epic |