Just for your future knowledge nothing he had done this year was out of his preview should read was out of his purview. I'm not trying to criticize, just be helpful. Love this story so far.

One of the changes you made -Crouch, Sr. still being alive - is interesting. Looking forward to reading about how this helps Sirius/Harry.

I can't wait to find out what else is going to happen to Skeeter!

No skunks in Europe? They're lucky. :-). I was laughing as I read the scene between Ron and Harry. Very original.

Uh oh :-(. Now they're going to have to search for him. Oh, wait, there's probably tracking charms on him, right?

I loved your story! It was well written and very entertaining! Keep up the good work!

This was a lovely read- thank you for writing!

Príbeh bol skutočne originálny. Veľmi sa mi páčil. Ďakujem za napísanie. Pozdravujem zo Slovenska

Horrible fight. He has yet to take anything seriously. This could have been a good learning opportunity but he just plays around and fights stupid.

oh yes because you can't capture both of them... I hate plot holes like this.

Big plot hole. Harry read his mom's diary about the prophecy...

God, Harry is a fucking dick.

This is getting annoying with all the angst.

great ride. i really enjoyed this one. thanks for not skimping on the McGonagall bashing. she and Remus get overlooked too often. loved he badass asshole harry. he sre had his moments. and the very end was a neat twist that i ery much enjoyed. thanks.

quite good book