Reviews for The Shock of it All |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your imagination! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron is nit Harry's friend, he is a hanger_on and only out for himself, hammer his ass! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kick Ron in the nuts with those steel toed boots! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna is gonna drive the adults bonkers! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kick"em when their up, kick'em when their down, kick'em in the nuts, kick'em all around! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fucking brilliant! Stick a chair leg up Snape's' and Dumbledore's asz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for that awesome story! You threw in some unexpected things. Army... ha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story. Thank you |
![]() ![]() there used to be skunks in Europe... a different species than here in North America, they have become extinct, though I don't remember why. |
![]() ![]() You could spell the name "Poppi" to make it more of an elf style name or not... you're the story teller, not me... good story BTW. Teas Grannie |
![]() ![]() Really good story but thought you would put more thought to your ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Frigging autocorrect. That was meant to say 'Not bad', not 'it bad'. Sorry about that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It bad. Definitely had its moments. |
![]() ![]() Great story! Except this little fiasco with the wards glitch. Humiliating Draco and Co. is sooo easy it's an unnecessary and possibly cheap shot to blatantly screw up the wards for a tiny smirk that is totally overwhelmed by the outrage of wards that out bully the bully . Is the ward so detailed that it identifies the culprit, knows their personality, evaluates their act of bullying then tailors a specific humiliating punishment? Are all children male and female, age 11 to 18 going to be subject to medieval barbaric punishment? Even though your story gets an overall Outstanding, this travesty rates a Troll. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m with Harry, finders and keepers! :D |