Reviews for Things We Cannot Undo |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I started giggling uncontrollably when Edea pointed out the love marks. It got worse when she yelled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was unexpectedly cute. I support these dads, they deserve happy times. |
![]() ![]() YAAASSSSSS THIS ISH SO SWEET N CUTE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So after finding the link to your story on Tumblr, decided to check this out as I'm curious how you'll develop this ship and I actually like it a lot! I was amused at some parts, like the mention of the rules, Minette and Rev barging in after "that", and Edea's reaction. Edea, you're the duchy leader, you're not supposed to outburst something like that, haha. Geist's backstory there is tragic, poor him. I too am curious if you plan to explore more as I'm interested how the others will react, though I'm sure the kids will be happy with it heh. Overall, great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet! I loved this story and I wonder whether you're planning to write more. |