|Reviews for Guardians of Forever|
| Steven Carnell chapter 21 . 2/11/2017
This story has a lot of elements to it that are confusing because they haven't been developed enough. A little more proof reading will be valuable as well.
Other than that please continue writing. Fan fiction is great for developing skills, especially plot and characterisation. You do need more development as a writer, but your potential is huge. Keep going.
B Arts (English) in Creative Writing.
| nayin1704 chapter 13 . 7/28/2016
Is Leon also Angelian?
| nayin1704 chapter 10 . 7/28/2016
Finally, Harry and Ginny are together now
| nayin1704 chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
Harry was so cute here
| nayin1704 chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
Love the description of the necklace and I'm curious about Carbuncle
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/17/2016
I LOVED IT! Ginny name is actually Ginevra... Other than that... AMAZING! I loved the end and the names and everything definitely AU but in the best possible way.
I have no regrets of reading this
| Epeefencer chapter 2 . 8/25/2015
Interesting meeting but I really doubt that Malfoy would be anywhere near where Hermione lived in the muggle world.
| AllIsFairInLoveAndWar chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
Is it just me or does the amethyst eyes guy sound like a Jedi?
| ARCH GRIFFIN chapter 7 . 2/15/2012
THIS IS ASOLUTE BLOODY SHIT!
No offense ment, but that's my Opinion, sorry.
| clara chapter 27 . 11/27/2011
i love this u first posted this on my 5th bday funny right
| Neverknownfuture chapter 27 . 3/5/2011
a little speedy but other than that it was elegant in it's simplicity, and hopefully it's sequel may be the same way.
| ginny917 chapter 10 . 1/18/2011
IS Leon Hart a guardian?
| gauravmittal2 chapter 27 . 7/17/2010
| xXMiss.BrightSideXx chapter 27 . 9/20/2009
HI. That was great!
| Teimoshi chapter 19 . 1/8/2009
Any fan of FF8 who cares about the music should know the song.