Reviews for Something Wicked This Way Comes |
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![]() ![]() Damn its been three years since i experienced the horror of reaching the end of a chapter here and seeing there isn't more. I don’t know much else to say. Does saying i had to double check my eyes to see that this indeed has continued or if it was the tears blurring my vision. Great read. Honestly i’m glad i checked back here in prep for season 2 of re zero. Rereading the whole thing has certainly been enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty cool chapter even if it's rather short. So lelouch will be meeting shaula soon? should be interesting on seeing how different the responses is from subaru |
![]() ![]() That last line kinde remind me of Avenegers. Will be waiting for the next update |
![]() ![]() update crot |
![]() ![]() ![]() hly sht this story is freaking good |
![]() ![]() ![]() c'mon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp time to reread this again XD |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying it all so far! Really glad that you’re updating again. Re zero is one of my favs and you do it a lot of justice. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does he keep killing himself? Why doesn't he go become a mage and then kill himself instead of handicapping himself by killing himself daily? He doesn't know his re spawn point will change, secondly why does he keep killing himself? Why should he care about some random elf or thief? Both of them have killed or harmed him in the past he should feel nothing positive for them even if they are royalty their status as witch and thief makes that far less valuable. I can't comprehend what exactly his goal is it doesn't make sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep writing! Hope you well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emotions fluctuated between Lelouch and Crutsch, I don't know who is right or wrong. Lelouch definitely reflects how much he has changed. Also, hopefully those |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it were setting up for a plot of visiting the witches seal giving us some nice expectation but open enough that it can lead in lots of interesting directions. there was some more bonding which is nice but if i had to nit pick i would say the flow of the conversation was a bit off. i know not being able to lie does make hiding his motives tricky but i feel like lelouch is shrewd enough that he can work with a restriction like that. at the very least lelouch is some one that likes control that's why his geass manifested the way it did. i know i might sound a little contrary here but lelouch felt a little too open here. i think if you lead in with a bit more of a mood setter it would of been fine maybe even have lelouch testing her ability a bit here and there to see what kind of lies by omission he might be able to get away with. yes you don't wanna drag a scene out too long but if you can make the interactions between them quirky or interesting to read then them just bonding even without sharing feeling or details of their past can make for a great scene even if the plot doesn't move much at all. personally i would love to see crusch and lelouch do a kind of verbal "dance/battle" where they try and weasel info out of each other or win some unimportant debate. even just mixing these quirky or fun interactions between bigger scenes that may have a more somber tone would be a nice touch. i hope i'm not coming across as too negative lol and i hope that me leaving these kinda long detailed reviews show how into this i am. i would love to delve into what you did great more but the chapter isn't too long so i feel like focusing on the devil in the details was a better focus here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I am dying to know what happens next! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, its nice to see how Lelouch is slowly building trust with the locals |