Heartbreaking news in this chapter.

Finally, Sirius comes to his senses! The DE attack is intriguing. I wonder why Dolohov was trying to warn her.

The scene where Hermione held Fred was beautiful, bittersweet.

That cliffhanger...

The scene where she receives the sweater was touching. What was Dolohov playing at? I wonder...

I loved the scene with Regulus.

I grinned as I read that Molly was pregnant with Fred and George. I liked how Remus pulled the big brother act on Sirius.

I like the thought that Lily would want to continue her education in the muggles world to be a doctor. The dare was funny. I liked the double date.

I loved that exchange between Sirius and Regulus in the hospital wing. Ravenclaw winning the house cup was great. I enjoy the writing style and plot of this story. Fabian and Hermione making amends agreeing to be friends was great. How adamantly Fabian was that he would protect her makes me wonder if she was inadvertently involved in his death.

Fabian unveling they glamour on her scars was surprising; I am in suspense concerning their next exchange.

I like how Hermione and Sirius have progressed. I loved how Regulus warned her and how he said that the Blacks were an unstable lot.

The various emotions caused by this chapter was intense. I absolutely loved the exchange between Hermione and Sirius at the end of the chapter.

I had wondered where Sirius had gotten Snow from when I had referred to her as his Snow. Now it makes so much sense. I wonder how she returns to her time. I wonder if Fabian had something to do with it.

The exchange between Hermione and a younger Molly and kids simultaneously made me anxious and giddy. Such a sweet scene. Although, I really like how Fabian is portrayed, I look forward to more interaction with Sirius. I liked how Severus was territorial and protective.

I thought it unique to place her in Ravenclaw. Good choice.

Fabian! Of course. It was foreshadowed when Molly said George's full name and the talk of the Wizangamout vacant seats. Great reveal. I like the characters interaction between Mia and the Lupins. I am loving how you've portrayed Fabian. Nice cliffhanger.

- Bren