Reviews for Tommen The Just
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
Bring her alive please.
princessElizabethtudor chapter 1 . 12/12/2018
You should do a story on Tommen and Margaery if they both survived. Love the story a lot.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
I loved this! This should have happened!
KasumiKeiko chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Any chance this could be continued?
Paradigm of Writing chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
Damn powerful.
Zero Rewind chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
How exactly did the prophecy come to pass? Tommen is her nephew/son , not her little brother. And, Jaime had already assumed his role as Lord of Casterly Rock and wasn't even there when Cersei killed all those people— how is it just or logical to punish him for it? It's like you didn't even watch the show.. lol.
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Good story.
thekillingperfection chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
really enjoyed reading your story and hope you write more. I sure like this better than canon right now.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Gotta say I like your version much more than the original one
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
OK in the books and show to men is boring as shit but if any hint of this happens I would give him a second chance. I hope this series continues
Mattias88 chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Much better ending for Tommen than just commiting suicide. If he was just a little bit stronger, this is what he should have done.
jean d'arc chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Yeah!
Poor Tommen, he was an idiot, but he was nice and sweet...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
- you should wall in Cersei in alittle room under the streets somewhere!
- Why did Jaime go to the Wall he is already stripped of the white cloak and is now lord of Casterly Rock?!