Reviews for Backward Without Purpose |
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Rebatrek chapter 1 . 11/4 Another good one ! |
sherrithewriter chapter 1 . 11/3 Brilliant story. Loved every word. Thank you! |
jjslll54 chapter 1 . 10/14 "Meanwhile back at the ranch." Something I havent heard since I was younger along with "we'll head them off at the pass" Those old B/W westerns were great. I've made my way through most of your stories and have enjoyed the ones I read. Glad I found them. jjslll54 |
atymer chapter 1 . 9/24 I loved sneaky Harry and Hermione! I can see Dobby dancing around chanting sneaky sneaky! |
Kallanit chapter 1 . 8/30 Nice story. There's a few plot holes (eg, why weren't Harry and McGonagall affected by the anti-animagus ward?) but on the whole, you did a very good job of fixing things. Harry and Hermione's disdain for the wizarding world was totally understandable and everything got wrapped up with a realistic (rather than an unbelievable fairytale) ending. I'm slightly disappointed that after everything they went through together, they ended up living so far apart they didn't seem to see each other, but it felt right that they didn't marry each other. |
MrsFH chapter 1 . 8/19 Another great story. Most time travel stories are very long and convoluted, and I loved how your tight editing and well crafted paragraphs moved the story quickly without any plot gaps. |
Trahald of Uru chapter 1 . 8/9 "Impotence" is an inability to get it up. "STERILITY" is where he's shooting blanks. Snape (pretty sure it was Snivvy) might like to do both, but Harry'd probably have noticed impotence if his wedding night with Ginny got embarrassing. |
Millie072 chapter 1 . 7/18 Much as I enjoyed this, there are a few questions. Line theft is considered a crime in the magical world. If Harry's kids by Ginny were such brats, why not have an inheritance test done at Gringotts, declare line theft and have the marriage annulled? What could the WW do if he simply moved his money to the muggle world and disappeared along with it? The device of having a coven in Ireland that could heal dark magic is a grand idea. Never seen a similar idea used before and I thought there were no more original ideas in the HP world. Thanks for a wonderful story. |
mackiechandler chapter 1 . 7/16 I like your imagination and your tendency to come up with better story lines than the original (although she was writing for children. Little did she know how popular she would be with adults). Very well done story. |
peggy77 chapter 1 . 6/29 Another nice story! |
sherrithewriter chapter 1 . 6/3 Brilliant story. This was so well-written — it was difficult to put down. Bravo on a very creative time travel story. I hope you write more. |
RubinCompServ chapter 1 . 4/18 If an anti-animagus ward was put in place, what did they do with Prof. McGonagall? And if your answer is "she was keyed into the ward", what about *Harry*? I'm sure he didn't tell anyone in authority that HE was an animagus! |
Molenir chapter 1 . 4/9 Lots of fun. One of the best time travel stories I've read. Though I'd have rather seen H/Hr, this was good too. Thank you for sharing. |
old-crow chapter 1 . 3/21 Fantastic! |
Arial Wolf chapter 1 . 3/12 that was fun totally fricking awesome bloody brilliant thank you for this amazing tale can't wait for more of your wonderful writing thanks you rock |