Reviews for Breaking Through the Bottom of the Bottle
houdinitheowl88 chapter 19 . 3/3
Lazyman12 chapter 13 . 2/23
He's dense, Jaune is so dense, that if his denseness was a physical object then it would collapse on itself and created a black hole big enough to swallow the milky way.
KookieKing chapter 18 . 2/22
KookieKing chapter 17 . 2/22
rrrrrrrrrapeeeeeeeeeeee not coooooolllllll dammit yang i ship u two why u gotta do this ; _ ;
thepkrmgc chapter 19 . 2/15
i'm going to interpret the waking up part as metaphorical, it seems like a better story that way
thepkrmgc chapter 18 . 2/15
nice job wrapping things up, having the shock at the beginning makes the happy ending all the sweeter
thepkrmgc chapter 17 . 2/15
props to jaune for drawing the line between fun and something more, and to yang for dareing to take the leap across
thepkrmgc chapter 16 . 2/15
and of course the past finds its way to interfere, but the goal is there, if their willing to try and take the plunge
thepkrmgc chapter 15 . 2/15
ok, as drunk as he is at this point i cant fault him for not noticeing
thepkrmgc chapter 14 . 2/15
and now he's starting to fall, i wonder when he will accept he's gone head over heels
thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 2/15
as montages go its a funny one, it also helps space things out a bit instead of dumping a bunch of pickup lines
thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 2/15
oh dear, now their drunk...
thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 2/15
good job keeping the humor up, poor yang is honestly asking for advice here...
thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 2/15
with the aura communication it adds even more layers to the fantastic dialouge
thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 2/15
it also wouldnt be jaune if he didnt manage to accidentally cause all sorts of chaos
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