Reviews for Breaking Through the Bottom of the Bottle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've heard so much about you. I've read almost everything Coeur has put out. I put off checking out your stuff for a very long time. I didn't think it would be bad, but I don't like starting things I think wouldn't be finished. I made the serious mistake of assuming based on 2 stories, one not even being your own, that it was a common thing. I see now I was mistaken, but it's painful to let yourself get engrossed and then not get the pay off. I decided better to not try rather than face the possible dejection. Guess I'm a bit like Jaune and Yang in that sense. This was incredibly well done. I started it on my lunch break, and here I am finishing it 12 hours later in bed. I loved it from start to finish. It's raw and it's real. I don't know if you still peruse the site with the gap since you last posted, but I'm glad I took the chance to read more of your stuff. I should have tried sooner. I hope you're doing well, whatever it may be. |
![]() ![]() Moral of the story: If you like someone, don’t tell them, just give them subtle hints. If they don’t get subtlety and hints, get them drunk and rape them. It’ll all work out in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont understand why they reacted so strongly at the thought of a child. is there an implication Ruby had an abortion? |
![]() ![]() (insert that clip of Jontron blowing a whistle and screaming "RAPE!" here) |
![]() ![]() Ironwood, we found a new material to cover your tanks in, i assure you, it is impenetrable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are, without a doubt, a fic writer that wrote convoluted shits so much that it turns so great I won't even complain, I'm going to ignore the last two paragraphs from last chapter so none of this sad and depressing nonsense even dare to approach |
![]() ![]() my heart still hurts |
![]() ![]() my heart hurts |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fucking fantastic i genuinely felt my heart drop when Yang wasn’t there beside him. You genuinely did an amazing job with this I wish I could say more but I can’t put it into words so I'm gonna stop here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One shotted this in a night, good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 7/10 Definitely felt a bit drawn out and...dubious consent-wise. But seemed a decent enough story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly believe that the whole "He woke up, and then so did she" part to mean, like, Jaune finally woke up to Yang's feelings being genuine, and Yang finally woke up to way to make Jaune see her as she saw him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s simple, its easy, it’s light, a lil grey but hey, life can relate. Most fics I’ve read on RWBY were emotional roller coasters, so reading this was just what I wanted instead of the usual headaches I got from dramatic heavy plots. I really enjoyed this and would recommend readers who like the simplicity of bittersweet romance taking place in years of friendship, with a side of self conflict and flirtatious humour ~ Thank you for writing this fic! |