my heart still hurts

my heart hurts

This was fucking fantastic i genuinely felt my heart drop when Yang wasn’t there beside him. You genuinely did an amazing job with this I wish I could say more but I can’t put it into words so I'm gonna stop here.

One shotted this in a night, good read.

7/10
Definitely felt a bit drawn out and...dubious consent-wise. But seemed a decent enough story.

I truly believe that the whole "He woke up, and then so did she" part to mean, like, Jaune finally woke up to Yang's feelings being genuine, and Yang finally woke up to way to make Jaune see her as she saw him.

perfection.

It’s simple, its easy, it’s light, a lil grey but hey, life can relate. Most fics I’ve read on RWBY were emotional roller coasters, so reading this was just what I wanted instead of the usual headaches I got from dramatic heavy plots. I really enjoyed this and would recommend readers who like the simplicity of bittersweet romance taking place in years of friendship, with a side of self conflict and flirtatious humour ~

Thank you for writing this fic!

Yes. Perfect.

This story never fails to make me cry. Wonderfully written, and does a great job showing the heartache, misery, and despair of being caught head over heels for someone you can never have.

I don't think I've ever not liked Ruby before this fic. Wow. Good job on the story it was well written

That...was great.

God this was painfully xiao long :D. That said it was also one of the greatest romances I've read from a fully fluff standpoint and I enjoyed way more than I would be willing to admit to anyone I personally know :D. Thanks for sharing!

Sweet and moving story.

This was pretty damn good... I'd like to see a pessimist sequel where Ruby did want a start over/rekindle... and also an optimist fic where Ruby tries to rekindle before Yang... or a sequel fic continuing after this one where thing's are optimistic... or one where Jaune accidentally got Ruby pregger's and she's got a kid no one knew about those five years...

so much potential.