Reviews for Breaking Through the Bottom of the Bottle
tetraforce theory chapter 19 . 8/24/2024
I've heard so much about you. I've read almost everything Coeur has put out. I put off checking out your stuff for a very long time. I didn't think it would be bad, but I don't like starting things I think wouldn't be finished. I made the serious mistake of assuming based on 2 stories, one not even being your own, that it was a common thing. I see now I was mistaken, but it's painful to let yourself get engrossed and then not get the pay off. I decided better to not try rather than face the possible dejection. Guess I'm a bit like Jaune and Yang in that sense.

This was incredibly well done. I started it on my lunch break, and here I am finishing it 12 hours later in bed. I loved it from start to finish. It's raw and it's real.

I don't know if you still peruse the site with the gap since you last posted, but I'm glad I took the chance to read more of your stuff. I should have tried sooner. I hope you're doing well, whatever it may be.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/6/2024
Moral of the story: If you like someone, don’t tell them, just give them subtle hints. If they don’t get subtlety and hints, get them drunk and rape them. It’ll all work out in the end.
Fierblaze chapter 14 . 6/1/2024
i dont understand why they reacted so strongly at the thought of a child. is there an implication Ruby had an abortion?
Guest chapter 17 . 3/12/2024
(insert that clip of Jontron blowing a whistle and screaming "RAPE!" here)
That guy chapter 11 . 3/3/2024
Ironwood, we found a new material to cover your tanks in, i assure you, it is impenetrable
Lazy Servant chapter 19 . 2/18/2024
Thanks for this.
denewyosh chapter 19 . 10/16/2023
you are, without a doubt, a fic writer that wrote convoluted shits so much that it turns so great I won't even complain, I'm going to ignore the last two paragraphs from last chapter so none of this sad and depressing nonsense even dare to approach
UserEvrOfAllTime chapter 19 . 7/28/2023
my heart still hurts
UserEvrOfAllTime chapter 8 . 7/27/2023
my heart hurts
brywallace03 chapter 19 . 6/26/2023
This was fucking fantastic i genuinely felt my heart drop when Yang wasn’t there beside him. You genuinely did an amazing job with this I wish I could say more but I can’t put it into words so I'm gonna stop here.
SinfiniteX chapter 19 . 6/3/2023
One shotted this in a night, good read.
User4154 chapter 19 . 9/19/2022
7/10
Definitely felt a bit drawn out and...dubious consent-wise. But seemed a decent enough story.
DeathBySunlight chapter 19 . 5/22/2022
I truly believe that the whole "He woke up, and then so did she" part to mean, like, Jaune finally woke up to Yang's feelings being genuine, and Yang finally woke up to way to make Jaune see her as she saw him.
NoobNub chapter 18 . 8/6/2021
perfection.
JustAReader124 chapter 1 . 8/5/2021
It’s simple, its easy, it’s light, a lil grey but hey, life can relate. Most fics I’ve read on RWBY were emotional roller coasters, so reading this was just what I wanted instead of the usual headaches I got from dramatic heavy plots. I really enjoyed this and would recommend readers who like the simplicity of bittersweet romance taking place in years of friendship, with a side of self conflict and flirtatious humour ~

Thank you for writing this fic!
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