Reviews for An Officers Duty
Zwei Eis chapter 6 . 6/18/2019
The plot thickens ahhhhh I'm so excited. Those cliffhangers murder me XD
I thoroughly enjoyed it thank you and till the next glorious chapter I'll wait patiently in a very impatient manner ;p
Zwei Eis chapter 5 . 4/26/2019
Alright caught up now to put it in my favorites and wait to see if you ever update again hopefully you do cause this story gets more interesting as it goes on although I will say the Mr. When addressing Emily confuses me especially cause she has a brother
Zwei Eis chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
This story brought me so much joy and excitement and I just want to let you know that i appreciate your work and Thank You! Chapter 1 is very well written and if you made any mistakes I didn't even notice I was so engaged. Now I probably won't write another comment till I'm finished but just take it as me giving thumbs up
DownTownAlpha chapter 5 . 10/3/2018
Well then you’re back!
TwilightScarlet chapter 4 . 9/10/2018
Oh scheisse! This whole Totalitarian Disease incident will be a HUGE disaster for all of the entire, whole world.
Poet's Buried Memories in Type chapter 3 . 2/6/2018
I hope to see more from this story soon.
Good luck!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/15/2017
great chapter and nice ending to chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
any update for this yet just wanting to know
michael chapter 2 . 7/15/2016
i love it
FOFF chapter 2 . 7/7/2016
HA!HA! Poor Sara! Anyway, Nice chapter! Will the Missouri's crew able to meet Harekaze's crew in the future? I can't wait to see it. I really like to see Harekaze's crew reaction Missouri's, especially they are seeing BOYS OPERATING a Battleship. In Blue mermaid Japan, Boys are ALLOWED to operate ONLY submarines. Poor! Japanese boys they never had any a privilege to operate EVEN a Destroyer. And also I hope there are some Harekaze girls interested in Missouri boys, the same for Missouri boys as well. That's all and good luck.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2016
great chapter and let me guess either the Missouri or the Baltimore will be one of the few US ships still operable and not infected. Also just saying fix where it starts at the new destroyer to shimakaze just letting you know because it says kagerō and will the musashi be repaired in time to help
fireycom21 chapter 2 . 7/9/2016
it would actually sound better if your background information to your story is done in a prologue (before chapter 1). Also, if possible, don't rush the story too much. Try to think of more ideas and put them in a chapter. Then slowly look out for errors. Your story has potential so far. Keep it up
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
great start to the story and are those several students ships the ones that helped or were saved by the first harekaze
KodokSangar chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
So, in your fic the US Blue Mermaid starting to accept males students? Well, I understand why the Bloomer only accept females and males only placed in SS and DDG.

Also, Another Kagerou-class? Well, that's a shame I expected some thing more advanced like Shimakaze. Can't wait to see the crew of Missouri and/or Baltimore met the Harekaze girls, they will do they?
AscendingCanadian chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
I'm posting this and reviewing the story Via PM, so you could always have a reference to the HaiFuriverse

Haifuriverse Events:

-World War Two didn't happen, but World War One did
-The only form of flight is by Blimps
-The Washington Naval Treaty (Google this up) wasn't signed, the London Naval Treaty wasn't signed also

Haifuriverse Ships:

-All Planned Shipclasses were built
-There are no Aircraft Carriers
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