10/10 READ

*That* can do it for bringing her towards using *magickal* practices to try to bring her sister back- the death or near-death of a sibling is devastating *enough* easily to break nearly anybody's brain and can lead to peculiar choices of solutions... it is one of our defenses that most of the worst choices we can make can be written off- with how evil in its basic nature is truly disgusting to almost everybody... this kind of predicted fallout *could* happen; especially as the *cost* of that kind of procedure she apparently would try to do in this kind of case.
It is not okay by any account but it is predictable- desperation can do that; but one way or another: this result won't do much good at all.

Loved the story. You're a fantastic writer and storyteller! Thanks for sharing this magic with all of us!

Felicitări răbdare și dedicarea e uimitor o poveste minunată

This was one hell of a ride ಥ‿ಥ, the roller coaster of emotions I experienced while reading this Masterpiece was unreal. I really am grateful and perhaps, lucky, to have found this piece that if I may be so bold as to say, better than the original. Not just because Elsanna is endgame, but the list of new interesting casts as well that the original can't just compare to.

Especially Devil, now THAT'S how you make a villain. Not just a villain, but a villain that one can respect despite what he has done because I believe deep down that he has done it because he cares for Elsa. He continues to earn my respect, especially when he shape shifted to Maxwell in the previous chapter.

That's all for now and again, I thank you great storyteller for giving us this awe-inspiring piece that I will never forget.

Man, the feels in this chapter is superb, like goddamn, I think this is the first time in forever that I felt this emotional over a fanfiction. I'm gonna throw it out there, you're easily one of the best Authors that I have had the pleasure to come across this platform. This is literally me rn ️️. Dead, empty and broken inside.

I don't know how I'm ever going to get these characters out of my head.
Given the length of the fic, the emotional density, the accuracy of the character descriptions, the grandeur of the love portrayed...
This is my Olympus of FF in general and Elsanna in particular.
Writing this fic must have been a colossal task.

I'm not very good at English, so this was a tough read for me, especially as I absolutely had to finish it before today (I wouldn't have time for the next two weeks).

I'd seen that there was a sequel. I said to myself (for the above reason): no, I'm not going to read it.
Then I saw how long it was ("only half" of the 1st) and said to myself: no no no.
Then I read the summary...
Well, yes, yes.

This fiction demonstrates extraordinary creativity.
I doubt that the discovery of this mirror here was just a chance development, but I think it was planned from the start.
(Then again, I could be wrong, which would be a nice twist lol).
Just like chapters 39 and 40, whose titles intrigued me as soon as I read them.
While the FF focuses on Elsa, almost POV Elsa, we suddenly discover Anna's deepest thoughts. Bright and dark like the two sides of the sun evoked in this very fiction.
And repeating phrases from the beginning of the fic.
It was masterly and intensely moving (as I commented in 39).

This fic is incredible.
It's hard to read for me as a non-native English speaker.
But I feel like I'm starting to get used to the style, and I'm taking advantage of this long weekend to try and make good progress.
But then again, chap 40 for example was full of reading interruptions.
And yet... it was brilliantly dark and ... Wow.

Anyway. Here we are in a more "action" phase. I can't predict what's in store, but it's about time Elsa got her act together. In any case, her demonstration of power during the golem attack phase in the forest was masterful, and a little too short for my taste (but it demonstrated her power all the more).
I'd like to see her a bit more... threatening and dangerous... I think that's going to happen. But I'm ready for anything in this story.

Artoria x Rin
Although I ship Saber x Irisviel, Saber x Rin is cute too

I'm in the middle... well, almost at the end of this chapter.
I can't read more than one sentence without tearing up, almost like the abandoned child I've never been.
About 150 words... more than some books...
And I thought the end of the previous chapter, with his deliverance, extactic liberation of joy, was a masterpiece... But then that flashback.

...

No words can explain. No others than yours juste above.

"Elsa was reunited with her sun. "

3

That intro is very moving.
It's a cover of the movie... but better :)

That ain't right, Elsa. WTF!?

That got a bit more emotional that I thought. I always hated the late King and Queen for what they put Elsa through. Isolation and separation was a terrible idea. But I’m glad Elsa is back now and is no longer nerfed

ANNA! Drunk Anna making great decisions