Reviews for Harry Potter - After the Epilogue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was going to wait until I finished the whole story. I enjoy, no make that love the story you wrote. But James needs to be reigned in. If I was able to advise Harry and Ginny I would give them a list. No more wheezes, I'd confisgate all he's packed for Hogwarts and I would put him on a no Hogsmeade weekend until he gets his head out of his back end. Also he'd have one month to get his grades back up. I'd also tell George just how close James came to killing Fred. There will be no more Wheezes until he gets rid of his hate. Otherwise he'd get homeschooled. He's turning Psycho and will find being on the wrong end of the law. I will now continue. |
![]() ![]() The only thing that I don't like about this story is how you made James such a jerk towards basically everyone in his family |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really don't think Harry would hit one of his kids, considering his own fairly abusive upbringing with the Dursleys. I think him slapping James was OOC. That's my only gripe with this fic so far though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is just painful to read how the adults are the most horrible unqualified parents ever. |
![]() ![]() Loved this story so much |
![]() ![]() Aww so sad to see this fic coming to the end, just the epilogue now |
![]() ![]() The only thing I didn't like about this version of the after the epilogue was the fact that you made James a total jerk other than that I loved this story a lot |
![]() ![]() Well it's about time Al showed James he could stop him easily. I hope it has some effect as James in your fic is either pure evil or totally insane, or both :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I would just silence James and banish him to his room every time he opened his mouth if I was his parent, he needs some actual psychiatric help (or magical mental health adjustment!) if you ask me |
![]() ![]() Ugh I know you've already written loads more of this, but I really hope James gets caught and punished, your version of him is really quite evil! |
![]() ![]() Soooo Loooong love it… but it’s gonna take me as long as it taked to read the Harry Potter series LOL! Love ya - justakid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reread again. Love this story. Thanks again for sharing your story! |
![]() ![]() Estimado Escritor: He leído tu escrito por segunda y no paro de encontrar cosas nuevas y divertidas en tu gran historia, espero sigas haciendo trabajos tan buenos como este, muchas gracias por todo! Eres genial. |
![]() ![]() So if I have this right, the atrium is 70 feet tall and sandwiched between the townhomes and apartment building/entrance. That would all be on one long side? Townhomes farther away from the entrance to the property, and the atrium is also visible from the entrance. That’s what i got. Great story, but I would really appreciate it if you posted a map or some sort of visual representation of the Cannons’ property? |
![]() ![]() Hi, i love your's fics and i'm just waiting for you to finish ATW too. I just finish read the chapter 107 and notice a little confusion: in the end is said that France are playing against South Africa and the game for England and Greece isn't finished, but i think that is Ireland that play against South Africa because France played against Ethiopian in Japan in a game that began before Scotland play Bulgaria. Congratulations on your writting! |