I've never much been into crossovers, especially Star Wars/Trek (although I have entertained the idea of a Borg vs. Yuuzhan Vong story), but I'm willing to give this story a shot. You say this story has better editing, yet I still spotted several mistakes that made this chapter hard to read at times. Also, you used Enterprise-E at the beginning, and then changed it to D. I'm curious to see where the story goes.

Please continue this story, don't delete it! I look forward to seeing what else is different and what happens next.