Reviews for Asunder |
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InvcShadow suxx chapter 28 . 11/30/2024 decent story, hate how you did Ino nothing wrong with Naruto having two wives especially with all the crap he goes through in this story |
Animeworld2.0 chapter 11 . 8/27/2024 Hello, this is "InfinityNoWhatifs."May I share your story on YouTube with an audience that prefers listening over reading. Channel link: InfinityNoWhatifs I will give proper credit in the description of your story, will also share video link under your story review for your view and we respect authors and their copyright. If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am ready to make changes according to your preferences. I would appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission. Thank you. |
kumaevans chapter 13 . 8/13/2024 Jirayia being the tenth member was one of the best twists I've seen in a fic in a long time. This story has become one of my favorite of all time. The pacing, the emotional conflicts of the characters, the schemes, this story just hits man. Absolutely amazing, I'm excited for what's to come! |
johnzeckleston chapter 28 . 3/17/2024 Good story, however I felt that it really dragged on especially after the Pain fight(basically last 1/3rd of story). My fav parts of the story were the Mokuton creativity and combat scenes. |
johnzeckleston chapter 9 . 3/16/2024 Really enjoying this so far, just my kind of fic with nicely progressing OP Naruto and Mokuton user. I normally skip the romance aspect parts of these fics, however Aijsai is very likeable and compliments this Naruto very well. The combat scenes are very well written in this with a lot of variety and showcasing of mokuton, i’m liking the custom made mokuton techniques so far. Really looking forward to Naruto fully mastering Kurama’s chakra as well. Zetsu is a real slimy guy in this, Naruto’s revenge on it will be sweet. Pacing, writing, characterisation, etc really good so far, 9/10 rating as of chapter 9. |
Lil Author Vert chapter 27 . 3/13/2024 They probably think she's weak because they're comparing where Naruto and the other characters are at right to where they were in Shippuden. I mean, she had to deal with Rinnegan EMS Sasuke, Mangekyo Kakashi, Asura Mode Naruto, and a super strong Sakura. In this fanfic, it's just Wood Guy Naruto haha. I like reading this tho |
Lil Author Vert chapter 18 . 3/13/2024 if naruto opened the seal shouldn't just have easy access to KCM |
Guest chapter 27 . 1/21/2024 One of the best Naruto stories on this site don't know how I haven't seen it before has a good flow except for the relationship but other then that 1110 I also found it funny that someone gave up this masterpiece simply because Kakashi died 'FanBoy' who only wants to read the same story over and over again with the MC having a different girl - GodLoves_Reading |
LoquePiemso chapter 28 . 12/15/2023 Una obra maestra 20/10 y god, con todo el afán de alabar. |
bibink729 chapter 1 . 12/7/2023 jnnnn |
Wonderful Imagination chapter 15 . 10/14/2023 Kurama referring to zetsu as "that vegetable" |
Paradoxity chapter 28 . 7/27/2023 Good fic. But the biggest flaw by far imo was Aijsai's character. Finished the whole story and I still don't know how to feel about her. I usually love rare pairings, especially when you can really mold their basically blank state personality like Aijsai but her personality just felt so generic, so bland...not to mention it felt like they got together basically instantly after they met, I had almost 0 investment in their relationship throughout the story. Ino basically won me over, even though I knew Aijsai was inevitable from the tags, with the flashback chapter alone ffs. The plot was excellent, Kakuzu and Zetsu were exceptionally written but compared to how you wrote the relationships in Pareidolia though, the romance was mediocre. Doubt you'll even see this though Cheers |
SlackingAsISleep chapter 1 . 7/13/2023 Kakashi died? Oh, okay bye. |
Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 3/26/2023 This is a grand experiment that I'm excited to explore |
yourfoxydope chapter 6 . 2/25/2023 fucking cringe |