|Reviews for Secret|
| GT500RonSmith chapter 11 . 11/22/2022
Castle would not have killed his friend. But, did he kill Matthews? Still haven't figured that one out!
| GT500RonSmith chapter 9 . 11/22/2022
I apparently started reading this one in 2016 and stopped at Ch.8. No idea why. I thought I must've finished it, but I checked the reviews and see that I didn't! So, this is all back tracking!
To me, it seems this was the background chapter, set the stage, familiarized Kate and John, setting up the next one. Good flow.
Before I forget, what strikes me about your writing, makes me envious, is your descriptions of the scenes everywhere you take us. The details let my mind vision the setting these guys are in. When I dabbled at writing my own stuff, I couldn't fathom doing that. Farthest thing from my mind. I only could see where the characters were going. That's what separates writers from penheads like me!
| CileSuns92 chapter 16 . 1/24/2022
As dark as the story was, these bloopers get the cherry on top. And the story in itself was dark, but you managed to scatter humor and love all throughout it. It was nice to see this different version of kate, looser and more open to the possibility of loving Castle, as well as his tragic backstory.
I was really moved by this whole story, thank you for sharing it!
| bponder chapter 6 . 3/5/2021
so wish you would finish this story but probably been too long now. love it though
| Debbie chapter 1 . 11/26/2020
You are one of my favorite writers on this site. Your story Night People was one of my favorites, I wish you would repost it, I would love to read it again. I love the way you depict the characters in your stories.
| castle2126 chapter 6 . 6/8/2019
Nice chapter! But what the fuck is Lanie obsession with backett and castle sex life . And Backett being bitch she share all those intimate details with her I means it seems like Lanie needs daily dose of Backett's sex life as air.
I seriously don't like that part that fucking Backett share all these things with Lanie what if castle shares all little details about Backett to boys .
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/29/2018
This was riveting and freakin' awesome! I didn't expect that final reveal in the cave. Very, very entertaining and I wish I could be more eloquent in my praise to do this story justice. I LOVED IT!
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/29/2018
Sidetracked! I love it! Nicely done.
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/23/2018
Wow, super thoroughly well put together story, thank you. Albeit late to the party.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2018
Late to the party but loving this already
| The-KLF chapter 16 . 12/29/2017
And these outtakes are freaking hilarious, thanks for including them!
| The-KLF chapter 15 . 12/29/2017
I've kept meaning to read this for a long time. For some reason, perhaps knowing it would be a grim tale, I put it off a long while. I loved Promises in C minor and perhaps wondered if it would be too similar. But today, off sick from work with a load of blocked sinuses, I knuckled down to it.
I'm totally blown away by the depth of this story. The details, the emotions. You don't flinch. And it's horribly fascinating, in the most awful ways, but you make it so it's impossible to stop reading. I salute you.
I was glad to see your note halfway through that John called you, it's good to know you keep in touch.
| bponder chapter 15 . 6/3/2017
I reread this story while waiting for updates on your newest offering. So dark, so scary - an amazing tale of survival and force of will. can't wait to have more of the current mythology
| Midnight Caller chapter 5 . 5/31/2017
*fans self* good lord, that dinner...
| mkat chapter 8 . 2/4/2017
If only you had been available to write for Castle! I always craved more backstory on Rick.