Reviews for The Crown Hangs Heavy
Ollie chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
oof, wholesome love and fatherly comfort, a warm thing to read. Thank you for writing it 3
Much love from three years into the future
thewriterstory chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Loved the story telling imagery and theme that ran through the whole thing :3
BendyPen chapter 1 . 9/3/2019
cRi I need to see more of this
AragakiYuki chapter 1 . 7/20/2019
Wow. Words cannot describe how beautifully you write! All the little flashbacks, all the emotions, all the subtle actions that speak so so much louder than wordsI really almost cried! (now, whether it was my feelings or your mastery over the words, that can be debated haha) I love this to pieces and am so glad I stumbled upon this! Thank you for sharing!
Kai chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
I love this. Seriously. It's amazing.
asterisms chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
I've read this before and I will no doubt read it again, and every time I feel like all the words have been punched out of me. This story is so heartbreaking, but also breathtakingly cathartic and I love it so much. Thanks much for sharing your wonderful work
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2019
The feels in this! Hakoda is amazing and honestly, a really good guy. I love how he's acting as a parental figure to Zuko.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
Please make a sequel!
claymade chapter 1 . 4/8/2019
Really awesome story. I love the way you structure it, the themes running through it of "telling stories" and Hakoda's skill at it and Zuko's lack of it and what each of their stories means for their lives, how it all builds together and intertwines. A really moving, touching character piece. Thank you very much for sharing this!
Dante 101 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
Wonderful. Absolutely, stunningly wonderful...This is excellent work!
Basil Allegri chapter 1 . 10/10/2018
Yep - could see this as an actual conversation.
Viniloversus chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
This was so heartbreaking and beautiful. I loved how you portrayed Hakoda and Zuko comparing him to Iroh. The conversation was masterfully done, it made me hate Ozai

Good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Rick K'Tish chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
I'd love to see how you imagine Zuko telling the Gaang why he changed sides goes, should you ever have the inspiration
guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
Yes! this isn't ooc, this has been written beautifully, you could actually FEEL the heart to heart talk, you could actually feel it, please don't take this down or edit it [sometimes edits make things go wrong] Thank you, thank you so much for this one-shot *wipes away tears* very few acknowledge it, that these are children, children stuck in war,
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