I'm a little confused about why Gwen's already dead when Morgana gets there. Did several decades pass between Morgana's death and her waking up in the afterlife? Or is the story AU?

Interesting idea about the afterlife having a magical forgiveness effect, but I don't really buy it. If that were the case, Uther would have stopped hating sorcerers and blaming magic for Ygraine's death, and yet if anything, Uther seemed to get more angry and bitter after he died, whereas his anger and bitterness had begun to ebb while he was alive.

While I see the appeal of this story to those who like feel-good fluff, personally I found it dramatically unsatisfying. Everything's so perfect that nothing feels real.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Very nicely done!

Ilove the idea of tking all the anger away. Very interesting twist on the afterlife. The plot was beautiful and well written. Great job.

I didn't know I needed to read that until I read it. The healing and forgiveness and wholeness of everyone was so well written! You conveyed the peace of Avalon very well through your writing. I was waiting for the wrap-up, and then all the sudden Merlin appeared and everything was perfect. So wonderful.

On a more technical note, you might want to mark this as complete (unless you want to write more, which would also be incredible), since people are much more likely to read a completed story.

Again, wonderful job!